DW Collaborative Fic: Fat Chance (4/4),

Oct 12, 2009 11:25

Title: Fat Chance (4/4)
Authors: doctorsdiva and lorelaisquared
Characters: Rose, Ten, Donna,
Rated: Adult (Note: Rating Change)
Words: 5,071
Disclaimer: Sadly David Tennant I mean the Doctor is not ours. All characters and storyline traces belong to the BBC. They just came to play in our sandbox and for that, we thank them. :)
Summary: Partners in Crime was all about ( Read more... )

fic, dwfic, doctor who, story: fat chance, collabfic

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alizarin_skies October 12 2009, 19:07:04 UTC
SQUUEEEE! What a perfect, wonderful ending for the story (and I LOVE that there's a question mark on the FIN :D)

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lorelaisquared October 12 2009, 19:10:58 UTC
*Squees with you and bounces* First review!

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the (somewhat evil) ending.

*hee* oh yes, what DOES that question mark mean????

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doctorsdiva October 13 2009, 13:23:10 UTC
Oh yes, question mark??? What on earth could that mean? I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and that we made you squee - we were hoping for a high squee factor. Thanks for commenting.
*divahugs*

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lorelaisquared October 12 2009, 19:18:02 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Who says there's a sequel?

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lorelaisquared October 12 2009, 19:32:07 UTC
*hee* I'm being evil and teasing you. It's a possibility but nothing has been decided for certain yet. There was debate over whether people would even want a sequel. *laughs*

And thank you for those amazing compliments to myself and Diva. We've had a blast writing this. Stay tuned, who knows what may happen next. *g*

Your groveling certainly gets you brownie points in my book! :) I reward you with Time Tummy Icon. Hmmmm

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teruel_a_witch October 12 2009, 19:26:55 UTC
WHOA, what a great ending, I knew Donna would come along, I mean how could she not? These three are AWESOME together :D and this
"Oi! I'm not into threesomes sunshine
MWAH, brilliant twist on that XDD
especially not with long, thin streaks of alien nothing."
So...Rose is ok, then?;) Only Doctor is a no xDD

The end - spooky, hello, blond man, who is absolutely, definitely and surely not the one we are all thinking about ;D

these were my lame attemps to show that something other then "OMG SO HOT" was going through my brain ;D

SQUEE! Sequel, sequel, sequel, pretty please with the Doctor on top. Wait? Did I say that out loud, bad me xDD

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lorelaisquared October 12 2009, 19:39:57 UTC
*snort* First I have to stop laughing at your comments...

Okay, *snicker*... I think *gasp* I'm good now.

Of course Donna had to come along. To leave her out would be a travesty. How else could she and Rose team up against the Doctor? Poor Doctor, he's going to have his hands full with those two. :) He was already regretful at the end there. *evil laugh* I'm enjoying this far too much.

Neither of us could part with the "You want to mate" conversation so we just HAD to find a way to get it in there.

LOL does that mean you liked our evil twist at the end? Dun, dun, dun, dun...

I'm so glad you enjoyed this incredibly long chapter so much. Thank you for your wonderful comments. (which, yes, made me laugh)

As for a sequel... you'll just have to wait and see... *grin*

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teruel_a_witch October 12 2009, 20:03:27 UTC
First I have to stop laughing at your comments...

*iz smug* My job here is done :D

Oh, Squid, you are totally spoiling me, I enjoy making you laugh so much and it's not like it requires terrible effort from me which is my two favorite things in any activity XD I just can't resist, I say before I think without holding back XDD

How else could she and Rose team up against the Doctor? Poor Doctor, he's going to have his hands full with those two.
MWAHAHA *insert devilish laugh here*

Neither of us could part with the "You want to mate" conversation so we just HAD to find a way to get it in there.

That is a totally brilliant conversation XD I watched it for the first time without subtitles and I was like "What?Who? What the hell are they talking about?" XDD

does that mean you liked our evil twist at the end?
I like the idea of twist, I just really don't like the man that is absolutely not one we are all thinking about ;DD

you'll just have to wait and see... to alter The Doctor's quote "It's all wait,wait,wait with you people" ;DDD ( ... )

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lorelaisquared October 12 2009, 20:11:08 UTC
*iz smug* My job here is done :D LOL You did it well. I'm not spoiling you on purpose you know, but I'm glad you're enjoying nonetheless.

I watched it for the first time without subtitles and I was like "What?Who? What the hell are they talking about?" XDD Yeah, it's rather confusing if you don't know the innuendo that Donna is reading into it. *snort* It's probably one of my all time favourite Donna moments. (I say probably because there are so many that I have a hard time deciding between them).

I like the idea of twist, I just really don't like the man that is absolutely not one we are all thinking about ;DD LOL well yes, that is the idea behind a surprise like that. Besides, the man you're referring to is otherwise engaged. *g* Just imagine him paying Rose back for that idiot comment whilst Donna is delivering the keys...

to alter The Doctor's quote "It's all wait,wait,wait with you people" ;DDD BWAH! Well, we are only human, not timelords and are therefore bound by human laws of time and pesky things like jobs and families ( ... )

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rowofstars October 12 2009, 19:28:16 UTC
Oh that question mark at the end is so deliciously evil! Lovely, wonderful story. Any collaboration you two do in the future, I'm there.

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lorelaisquared October 12 2009, 19:43:15 UTC
Thank you Nylana. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Yes, we definitely had our evil hats on with the ending and the question mark. *giggle* Who knows what will happen next. Stay tuned! :)

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doctorsdiva October 13 2009, 13:29:36 UTC
Oh honey that is such a lovely thing to say. I must say we had a ball writing this, getting very excited at ever plot turn and no arguments. As for the future...well watch this space.

*divahugs*

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sunnytyler001 October 12 2009, 19:50:30 UTC
Fin? Are you kidding? More please!!!!
This was awesome and deserves a sequel!!!

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lorelaisquared October 12 2009, 19:53:49 UTC
Thank you, thank you. Your comment and enthusiasm is much appreciated. I'm so glad you enjoyed this joint endeavor so much.

*hee* We really were cruel with that ending, weren't we? *laughs* All I can say is that a sequel is being contemplated but is not yet confirmed.

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sunnytyler001 October 12 2009, 19:55:58 UTC
Please, please, please, pretty please?
*gives free cookies*

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lorelaisquared October 12 2009, 19:58:07 UTC
Oooooh Cookies. *oogles*.

I shall have to speak to Diva... ;)

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