DW Collaborative Fic: Fat Chance (4/4),

Oct 12, 2009 11:25

Title: Fat Chance (4/4)
Authors: doctorsdiva and lorelaisquared
Characters: Rose, Ten, Donna,
Rated: Adult (Note: Rating Change)
Words: 5,071
Disclaimer: Sadly David Tennant I mean the Doctor is not ours. All characters and storyline traces belong to the BBC. They just came to play in our sandbox and for that, we thank them. :)
Summary: Partners in Crime was all about ( Read more... )

fic, dwfic, doctor who, story: fat chance, collabfic

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teruel_a_witch October 12 2009, 20:03:27 UTC
First I have to stop laughing at your comments...

*iz smug* My job here is done :D

Oh, Squid, you are totally spoiling me, I enjoy making you laugh so much and it's not like it requires terrible effort from me which is my two favorite things in any activity XD I just can't resist, I say before I think without holding back XDD

How else could she and Rose team up against the Doctor? Poor Doctor, he's going to have his hands full with those two.
MWAHAHA *insert devilish laugh here*

Neither of us could part with the "You want to mate" conversation so we just HAD to find a way to get it in there.

That is a totally brilliant conversation XD I watched it for the first time without subtitles and I was like "What?Who? What the hell are they talking about?" XDD

does that mean you liked our evil twist at the end?
I like the idea of twist, I just really don't like the man that is absolutely not one we are all thinking about ;DD

you'll just have to wait and see...
to alter The Doctor's quote "It's all wait,wait,wait with you people" ;DDD

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lorelaisquared October 12 2009, 20:11:08 UTC
*iz smug* My job here is done :D LOL You did it well. I'm not spoiling you on purpose you know, but I'm glad you're enjoying nonetheless.

I watched it for the first time without subtitles and I was like "What?Who? What the hell are they talking about?" XDD Yeah, it's rather confusing if you don't know the innuendo that Donna is reading into it. *snort* It's probably one of my all time favourite Donna moments. (I say probably because there are so many that I have a hard time deciding between them).

I like the idea of twist, I just really don't like the man that is absolutely not one we are all thinking about ;DD LOL well yes, that is the idea behind a surprise like that. Besides, the man you're referring to is otherwise engaged. *g* Just imagine him paying Rose back for that idiot comment whilst Donna is delivering the keys...

to alter The Doctor's quote "It's all wait,wait,wait with you people" ;DDD BWAH! Well, we are only human, not timelords and are therefore bound by human laws of time and pesky things like jobs and families. Sadly that means we do not have boundless hours of writing time. Where's a TARDIS when you need one?

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teruel_a_witch October 12 2009, 21:00:28 UTC
I'm not spoiling you on purpose you know
'course I know. You are not that evil ;DD

it's rather confusing if you don't know the innuendo that Donna is reading into it
It's more a question of not hearing than not knowing xD It's quite hard to discern Donna's and Doctor's gobs for a first time and without transcript XD

It's probably one of my all time favourite Donna moments.
For me it's crucial moment that shatters even the idea of shipping Doctor and Donna, I mean they are both SO horrified by the idea, how can Doctor/Donna shippers even bother? XD

Besides, the man you're referring to is otherwise engaged.
Lol, it took me a few moments to understand what you mean xD because my phrase was the continuation of the first hint, when I was referring to the blond man and saying that we *absolutely* have no idea who he was because he's not the one we all thought he might be, which was, of course, irony ;) Doc, I barely avoided confusing myself XDD

Just imagine him paying Rose back for that idiot comment whilst Donna is delivering the keys...
Lol, I've actually already imagined the position Donna might find them in when returning, after they started kissing it was the first thing that came to my mind that they might not make it to the bedroom this time, what's bad about against the door anyway? XDDD

Where's a TARDIS when you need one?
Busy by very busy Doctor and Rose and already sick of their lovey-dovey Donna "You know, spaceman, it stops being cute after AWHILE" XDD

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lorelaisquared October 12 2009, 21:21:17 UTC
*snort*

'course I know. You are not that evil ;DD
Are you sure about that?

For me it's crucial moment that shatters even the idea of shipping Doctor and Donna, I mean they are both SO horrified by the idea, Very good point. I ship them as companion and Doctor and nothing more. The one time they kissed (in The Unicorn and the Wasp) I laughed my a** off for a full ten minutes and then watched it again. The expressions on their faces - BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Lol, it took me a few moments to understand what you mean xD because my phrase was the continuation of the first hint, when I was referring to the blond man and saying that we *absolutely* have no idea who he was because he's not the one we all thought he might be, which was, of course, irony Oooooh. *headdesk* I is dumb. (tap, tap, tap, tap) I totally misinterpreted that. Now I get what you mean. (tap, tap, tap, tap). Regeneration isn't at all a possibility of course (tap, tap, tap, tap). *grin*

Lol, I've actually already imagined the position Donna might find them in when returning, after they started kissing it was the first thing that came to my mind that they might not make it to the bedroom this time, what's bad about against the door anyway? XDDD LOLOLOL Perhaps one day we'll have to write a missing scene to let you know if you're right. Then again, your fantasy land seems to be just fine. So maybe we should leave it alone :)

"You know, spaceman, it stops being cute after AWHILE" XDD BWAHAHAHAHA I think he'd be mortified. Look how apalled he was at the idea of Donna knowing what they were up to while she was gone. Not that he didn't make it kind of obvious. Silly Doctor.

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teruel_a_witch October 12 2009, 21:52:45 UTC
Are you sure about that?
Affirmative :P *voice of the Beast* Because I'm watching you *MWAHAHAHAHA**iz evil*
I ship them as companion and Doctor and nothing more.
They are more like BBF's for me;)

The one time they kissed (in The Unicorn and the Wasp) I laughed my a** off for a full ten minutes and then watched it again. The expressions on their faces - BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Oh, yeah, that is just priceless XD The only kiss not with Rose that doesn't make me cringe and look away because that's so bloody hilarious, and I ADORE the whole poisoning-scene, It's so brilliant I have no words, I'm sure If I hadn't been head over heels with David already I'd have fallen for him after this scene, his acting was so great, and Catherine is just a brilliant)
I totally misinterpreted that.
I guess I wasn't that clear, hehe, I wanted to create a semblance that the personality of the blond man was not obvious at all ;D
Regeneration isn't at all a possibility of course (tap, tap, tap, tap).
Not in a million years *no,no,no,no* ;D
Then again, your fantasy land seems to be just fine. So maybe we should leave it alone
No-no-no-no, my fantasy is always hungry for pretty shiny words, how can you deprive it of those? *makes her best doe eyes impression* How am I supposed to learn new things about language,eh?

btw, since we are talking about *language*, does "commando mode" imply "no underwear"? *snicker*
I think he'd be mortified.
Poor woobie *pets* *singsongs*He thinks he's so subtle *ggg*
Not that he didn't make it kind of obvious.
He might as well put a badge "I've just had reunion-sex" on his face XDD

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lorelaisquared October 15 2009, 07:13:18 UTC
Oh yes, they are totally BFF's! :)

That poisoning scene is delightful. Some of the BEST comedy I've ever seen. Whenever I need cheering, that's one of the scenes I at least consider watching.

I agree, Catherine is brilliant. She's so amazing. I can't believe how great she was as Donna. Awesome just doesn't even come close to describing her.

No-no-no-no, my fantasy is always hungry for pretty shiny words, how can you deprive it of those? *makes her best doe eyes impression* How am I supposed to learn new things about language,eh? LOL I will keep this in mind. Will try to remember that you need these things for language learning purposes. LOL.

Haha! Yes, Commando implies no underwear. Don't ask my why exactly, since I haven't the foggiest, but that's definitely what it means.

Oh yes, the Doctor is so vey subtle, isn't he?

He might as well put a badge "I've just had reunion-sex" on his face XDD *snort* Now that's just BEGGING to be iconed. LOLOLOL.

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teruel_a_witch October 15 2009, 19:52:30 UTC
Some of the BEST comedy I've ever seen. Whenever I need cheering, that's one of the scenes I at least consider watching.

yeah XD If there were no famous Catherine&David student Vs teacher sketch I'd totally be watching this scene all the time when I needed cheering XD
Will try to remember that you need these things for language learning purposes.
Yup, solely for scientific purposes, no hidden agenda here *tries to keep a straight face*
*fails*
Ok,ok, learning is like the farthest thing on my mind when reading smut XDD

Don't ask my why exactly, since I haven't the foggiest, but that's definitely what it means.

lol, maybe it's because he's always ready, erm, to participate in a battle ;DD

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