Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Thirty of 'Inter Vivos" (Part Five): Snake

lomonaaeren

Chapter Thirty of 'Inter Vivos" (Part Five): Snake

May 27, 2009 10:08

pov: multiple, novel-length, harry/draco, angst, set at hogwarts, drama, magical creatures included, inter vivos, au, rated r or nc-17, mentor!fic, romance

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fancypantsdylan May 27 2009, 18:30:42 UTC

OMG, that was a bloody brilliant sub chapter, can't wait to see what happens now

lomonaaeren May 28 2009, 00:29:18 UTC

Thanks!

azamir May 27 2009, 19:19:58 UTC

*_______* Snape to Sirius' rescue!

great ending! and Ron lives!!!!!

Thanks so much for this!

lomonaaeren May 28 2009, 00:29:36 UTC

Oh, yes!

(Not that Snape will want to think of it that way).

And thanks!

mystic_tear May 27 2009, 20:50:08 UTC

Whew. Thank God that's over. Nicely done.

lomonaaeren May 28 2009, 00:29:44 UTC

Thank you!

yanagi_wa May 27 2009, 22:44:13 UTC

You know, this could end right here and I'd be satisfied. This chapter was perfection. But I'm all a quiver for the epilogue. You do such good work.

lomonaaeren May 28 2009, 00:31:33 UTC

Thanks!

I would actually have ended it here, but I think it needed more to tie up the loose ends. Narcissa's funeral, for example.

helenadax May 27 2009, 23:15:22 UTC

Even if poor Narcissa is dead, this end is awesome. I like your version more than Rowling's one. I'm glad you didn't kill Ron.

I loved when Harry was thinking about the love and the hate that he needed and I find interesting the hint that the Dursley weren't as bad as Harry thought. It would be a very original fic.

Wonderful story, I'm sad it's over.

lomonaaeren May 28 2009, 00:32:21 UTC

Thank you! There's an epilogue coming, but I promise not to kill any more characters in that, either. :)

The Dursley abuse was still pretty bad here, but the Horcrux may have been responsible for some of Harry's extreme reactions to things like people finding out.