Comments | loganandmarie: Over the Rainbow 6/?

dutchxfan in loganandmarie

Over the Rainbow 6/?

Jul 26, 2012 19:04

Beta: Thank you jaq_of_spades!

Chapters: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |

Author’s Notes: This is a little scene in which we deal with Warren's presence in the Mansion from Marie's POV. Just one more scene to get everyone together, and the story can finally take off. Pfew... Marie's being cranky long enough already ( Read more... )

universe: x3 (the last stand), genre: shipperfic, author: dutchxfan, rating: r, fic

Comments 11

anonymous July 27 2012, 07:51:00 UTC

Warren! I <3 Warren. He doesn't get enough attention. Thank you for not forgetting him. ^.^ Is he going to compete with Logan for Rogue's affection? Good Angel vs Bad Wolverine. That would be interesting.

dutchxfan July 27 2012, 13:31:43 UTC

To be honest, I almost did forget him, but then he showed up for the team meeting (next scene) and I thought, 'Oh, right. Warren's still around.' Luckily this scene pretty much wrote itself. Warren's easy like that.

As for Marie's attention, I don't really know where this fic is going, but a little bit of jealousy wouldn't hurt anyone, I guess. :P

tannasan July 28 2012, 16:06:18 UTC

Hehehe! Now I know I got a sneak peak at this before... but somehow reading it on here again is still super exciting!! :D I think I liked it even better this time around! LOL! I still love Warren and stick to what I said before that he's left out far too often (X3 included). But I read the other comment here about he and Logan fighting for Rogue's attention... not sure how I feel about that yet... though I did totally get a vibe between them while reading this... I could see it happening... just as long as I'm guaranteed that she'll make the right choice in the end!!! (without hurting Warren of course...). I'm not asking too much now, am I? *grin* I also can't help but notice how sarcastic she is, even if it is only in her thoughts. She still seems to bitter and jaded... gotta do something about that. I'm thinking some good ol one on one time with her soon to be best buddy should help turn that around ( ... )

dutchxfan July 29 2012, 14:54:54 UTC

Ah, there you are. As for Warren, I don't know. I was actually thinking he might be busy with Jubes. She's everything he's not and vice versa. And Jubes deserves a sweet boyfriend for a change, don't you think?

Yeah, she's bitter still, but it's stil the same day as the first chapter. It takes time. And more interaction with Logan. :P

joanna_484 July 29 2012, 13:41:33 UTC

Wasn't expecting to hear from Warren, but it's a pleasant surprise. We can never have too many conflicted mutants, right? *lol*

I'm already anticipating the next part :D

dutchxfan July 29 2012, 14:57:45 UTC

Thanks! The next chapter is more or less done, as is the one after that. *is proud of herself*

I realised I hadn't dealt with Warren yet, so this was a nice in-between piece to have him and Marie introduced. Since he's a really nice guy, there luckily was no screaming involved. :)

thatcraftykid August 12 2012, 02:06:38 UTC

Yay! I'm so happy to be reading more from you. I agree with everyone, adding a Warren interaction is a really unique but totally perfect addition.

dutchxfan August 13 2012, 16:03:04 UTC

Thanks! A new chapter (7) is up, too. I'm still struggling with writing and getting back into the process, but at least I'm having fun again. :)

How's it going over there?

kittenrescue August 14 2012, 22:15:12 UTC

I liked her hesitancy in facing Warren. But very happy for her that he was so accepting and understanding.

The Daily Jubes ... love it. Yup, telling Jubilee anything is like alerting the media.

dutchxfan August 18 2012, 08:51:25 UTC

Yeah, I figured it must be weird to face the guy who the Cure was for originally. Especially if he turned it down. But Warren seemed so nice in X3, I figured Marie didn’t need more drama and so this went over rather smoothly.

Jubes needs to have her own newspaper. I love that girl so much.