Sundays are perfect for exorcism...

[lizzy_copycat]

It's Sunday, I'm way behind on my homework and I had to go to a Birthday party this morning. What a splendid day for writing fanfiction. Well, to be honest, it wasn't fanfiction so much as it was exorcism

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[gwennafran]

*ROTFL* That last line from Snape really did the trick. ^_~
I love the ANs. So wonderfully pointless.

[lizzy_copycat]

They were, weren't they? Should there have been more of them? Part of me thought maybe there should've, but then there was that other (slightly more) sensible part of me that had me slapping my own hands as I wrote the ones that are there...

[gwennafran]

Hehe, I was annoyed enough by those that were in the story.
However, I'm lacking all those dreadfull typos, that makes the story extra special, since they're so bad that even I shakes my head (and believes I could do better)...
Just.. A couple really well places in special chosen lines or descriptions of her appearence. Or something. ^_~

[onkel_ond]

Ooooh... YES! She could spell things phonetically, like someone with analfabetism would.
""I want tu seks ju op, sevvi-puh ^_^!!" den teh katgurrrl pouncd hym and dey maid wuh-pi" Not the most brilliant of comedy, but I DO enjoy on rare occasions to kick the ones that lie down. Okay, maybe more often than not. Or rather; most of the time. Um... eh, I'm not kidding anyone, I'm a malicious and sadistic person who revels in the pain of those he considers below his station. ^^ That and a believer of the phrase, "all daughters not locked up are forfeit."

P.S. Would a true Mary-Sue even consider using punctuation of any kind? Just wondering, I've never personally seen it, but there might be some of them who aren't illiterate, but just flat out idiots and thus have at least a basic grasp of comma punctuation. And how NOT to use it, which they don't.

[onkel_ond]

Jesus Stigmata-juicing Christ! x_X *lmfao* I don't know if it's a good thing or not that it reminds me to such a degree of stories I've had the poor judgment of summary to read that I can't begin to imagine an intelligent and at least somewhat rational being have written it. *sniggers* But there's no choice but to fall to the dark side and love it for its sheer absurdity.
On a related note, I have a perfect title for your next story about Mary-Sue;
"Mary-Sue and the close encounter with the grill of a Mack truck." X3

[lizzy_copycat]

That's right. Come over to the dark side. It's much nicer here.

Rational? Who's rational? What are you talking about?