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lizzy_copycat

Sundays are perfect for exorcism...

Sep 25, 2005 16:03

It's Sunday, I'm way behind on my homework and I had to go to a Birthday party this morning. What a splendid day for writing fanfiction. Well, to be honest, it wasn't fanfiction so much as it was exorcism ( Read more... )

mocking, harry potter, fanfic, mary-sue

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gwennafran September 25 2005, 08:26:09 UTC

*ROTFL* That last line from Snape really did the trick. ^_~
I love the ANs. So wonderfully pointless.

lizzy_copycat September 25 2005, 09:08:49 UTC

They were, weren't they? Should there have been more of them? Part of me thought maybe there should've, but then there was that other (slightly more) sensible part of me that had me slapping my own hands as I wrote the ones that are there...

gwennafran September 25 2005, 14:37:41 UTC

Hehe, I was annoyed enough by those that were in the story.
However, I'm lacking all those dreadfull typos, that makes the story extra special, since they're so bad that even I shakes my head (and believes I could do better)...
Just.. A couple really well places in special chosen lines or descriptions of her appearence. Or something. ^_~

onkel_ond September 25 2005, 15:56:47 UTC

Ooooh... YES! She could spell things phonetically, like someone with analfabetism would.
""I want tu seks ju op, sevvi-puh ^_^!!" den teh katgurrrl pouncd hym and dey maid wuh-pi" Not the most brilliant of comedy, but I DO enjoy on rare occasions to kick the ones that lie down. Okay, maybe more often than not. Or rather; most of the time. Um... eh, I'm not kidding anyone, I'm a malicious and sadistic person who revels in the pain of those he considers below his station. ^^ That and a believer of the phrase, "all daughters not locked up are forfeit."

P.S. Would a true Mary-Sue even consider using punctuation of any kind? Just wondering, I've never personally seen it, but there might be some of them who aren't illiterate, but just flat out idiots and thus have at least a basic grasp of comma punctuation. And how NOT to use it, which they don't.

lizzy_copycat September 26 2005, 01:04:01 UTC

I know. I tried. But I'm a spelling-geek. Just ask Gwennafran. I would not be able to post something with deliberate mistakes in it for fear that just ONE person wouldn't realize I was doing it on purpose. All that other stupid shit, if they think I mean it, fine. But bad spelling? No way!!!1! <--I added that annoying '1' just for you. That's as far as I'll take it....

There is some punctuation, isn't there? It just not, y'know, anything the rest of us understand.

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