Comments | lizzasaurus: Writer's Block: Long Nights, Short Poems

lizzasaurus

Dec 22, 2008 00:27

why do i still count
syllables on my fingers
when i read haikus

very clever, Liz, very clever. (um, no)

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anbertim December 21 2008, 16:31:12 UTC

liz is not clever
tim is cleverer than liz
cause he writes haiku

lizzasaurus December 21 2008, 16:41:58 UTC

touché.

anbertim December 21 2008, 16:46:13 UTC

ttly

highlifevista December 22 2008, 03:32:26 UTC

tim thinks he's clever
just because he writes haikus
but they don't make sense

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gunshotwoundsxx December 22 2008, 04:13:12 UTC

LOL your haiku is made of win, bb. A+!

lizzasaurus December 22 2008, 15:45:33 UTC

ahaha you should reply in haiku too! XD

thank you bb ahahah.

gunshotwoundsxx December 22 2008, 15:47:26 UTC

i have zero experience of
writing weird little haikus
but THERE'S ALWAYS FIRSTS

LOL

lizzasaurus December 22 2008, 15:55:47 UTC

hahaha good try bb! XD