Title: The Freudian Slip (8/15) (Part Three)
Author: Gess aka live_by_lyrics
Pairing: Jack Barakat/Alex Gaskarth
P.O.V.: third person omniscient, (slightly limited to Jack Barakat)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: References to sensuous touching and psychiatric help.
Summary: An amateur psychoanalyst becomes enamoured with his latest patient.
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Honestly, this is amazing Gess. I love how everything just makes sense. All the costumes are just spot on and Alex's character is becoming more and more defined and inciting as you write him.
I'm very interested to know more about Gabe's reaction to meeting Alex but I'm sure you'll tell us that when and I we need to know. I like how sometimes through Jack's very composed self he shows he is actually human aswell, not just an attractive robot :L
But really, mental images!!
Jack Barakat and tight lycra... Enough said!
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I’m working on Alex, slowly but surely all will be revealed. But yes, keep an eye on Gabe! He’ll give us the first major clue.
Ahaha, attractive robot. I think because it’s written from Jack’s POV in a way, he comes off as perfect. But let’s face it, he’s got a sex drive and makes mistakes just like everyone else.
Tight, black, slightly shiny spandex that clings to his body as he moves. Ahaha, I’ve forever tainted my childhood image of super heroes.
Ps. How is Wonderland going? I really want to work on it before I attempt anymore of TFS :)
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Also, sorry for any typos I'm using my iPod as my laptop is being a moody bitch today.
It's going well! Tomorrow I shall sendyou where I've written up to, maybe you'd like to write the next scene of, uh, yeah I probably shouldn't give it away here but yeah xD urrrgh I'm tired and not making sense, ignore me and wait for a coherent message.
I love this story
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Thank you :)
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I think the plot is thickening perfectly, I love how it's not too rushed but there's still a lot happening. Can't wait for the next update :3
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I'm glad you like the pace. I always worry I'm too slow and that people will get bored.
I'm currently brainstorming chapter nine:)
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