Oh my. I hadn't.. this was not the ending I had expected. not that I had expected anything, but if I had this wouldn't have been it. If you catch my drift. It was one helluva twist I must say. I don't really feel sorry for Harry though. He had it coming. Weird. Normally I would be crying my eyes out by now. I really liked it though. It was unique. And evil!Draco was awesome! I could totally see a wicked gleam in his eyes when he offed Harry.
Careful, i'm flamablelilith1631May 28 2007, 16:56:21 UTC
Omg the first review and you liked it! *sigh of relief* I am fully expecting to be flamed for what i have done to harry
Glad you like draco, i am quite fond of his characterisation, if i do say so myself.
I didnt think the "and then we feel in love after i wiped his memory and we lived happily every after" was very plausible ending...so instead i was a malicious bitch and harry had to suffer for it lol
Thanks for commenting, i love you for not flaming Lilith Slash a day keeps boredom at bay
Re: Careful, i'm flamablesilverferret89May 28 2007, 17:29:51 UTC
"and then we feel in love after i wiped his memory and we lived happily every after" was very plausible ending.. I felt kinda sad for Draco with that ending. It just seemed unfair that he should be submitted to such a relationship. It didn't sit me well. So I'm really relieved that he found out, and didn't let Harry get of the hook^^
Re: Careful, i'm flamablelilith1631May 28 2007, 17:37:08 UTC
Right there with you, the majority of people said they wanted a happy ending, but if i wrote a we're-a-couple ending then what would the body of the fic been about? "draco and harry went shopping, had some lunch, shagged a bit, bought a puppy and lived in the country. Fin."
My first draft of the opening scene had draco almost described like a rape victim. I tried to keep his carefree...ness as much as possible throughout. draco is a slut. and a slut is like a bird. and a bird should be free.
i sympathised with harry in this fic, but that may be because i characterised him to be like a needy puppy...
The stalker has landedmytailorisrichMay 28 2007, 17:19:43 UTC
Yeah, you had to stop here because i was running out of compliments ;) hehe I know that its not a pretty ending but, in my humble opinion, is a good ending, the ending the story demanded (maybe not at the beginning but after everything, it just seemed a "logical" ending). I'll miss them (Mind and Bob). Good story, great ending and nice style. Hope to be reading you :P soon!
Re: The stalker has landedlilith1631May 28 2007, 17:23:23 UTC
Hello Stalker #2
I am so glad i didnt get flamed on the first review, and glad you liked the ending too. And sorry for lying to you about what the ending was like on MSN, if i'd told you, you never would have betaed it
Mind the cat is yours, and so are Rhea and Marius are all yours - do with them what you will
As much as I usually hate death!fics...I actually liked this ending, lol. Harry was a little bastard! I would have been much more upset if they would have lived "happily ever after". Your Draco was perfect how he was - as a rentboy. I think we all know that if Harry really loved him (which he obviously didn't) he'd get that too. Nice series!
I know you said this is THE END, but.... epilogue?! please please pleeeease! because... i just haaaate non-happy endings! (cries) poor harry. poor draco! argh.
Re: OH NOOOO!!!!lilith1631May 28 2007, 18:38:35 UTC
I have recently, after having my hopes lifted by all these non-flaming reviews, been inspired with a little add on to this fic...However...until i can nuture my plot bunny with the proper care it needs, this is the end...for now.
Glad that you like the ending - it seemd that the "lovely twist" killed harry more than you :P
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It was one helluva twist I must say. I don't really feel sorry for Harry though. He had it coming.
Weird. Normally I would be crying my eyes out by now.
I really liked it though. It was unique. And evil!Draco was awesome! I could totally see a wicked gleam in his eyes when he offed Harry.
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Glad you like draco, i am quite fond of his characterisation, if i do say so myself.
I didnt think the "and then we feel in love after i wiped his memory and we lived happily every after" was very plausible ending...so instead i was a malicious bitch and harry had to suffer for it lol
Thanks for commenting, i love you for not flaming
Lilith
Slash a day keeps boredom at bay
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I felt kinda sad for Draco with that ending. It just seemed unfair that he should be submitted to such a relationship. It didn't sit me well. So I'm really relieved that he found out, and didn't let Harry get of the hook^^
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My first draft of the opening scene had draco almost described like a rape victim. I tried to keep his carefree...ness as much as possible throughout. draco is a slut. and a slut is like a bird. and a bird should be free.
i sympathised with harry in this fic, but that may be because i characterised him to be like a needy puppy...
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I am so glad i didnt get flamed on the first review, and glad you liked the ending too. And sorry for lying to you about what the ending was like on MSN, if i'd told you, you never would have betaed it
Mind the cat is yours, and so are Rhea and Marius are all yours - do with them what you will
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i didn't expect the fic to end that way, but i really do like the twist!
Draco makes the perfect femme fatal.
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*crosses fingers for more love* still expecting a flame...poor harry...
YES! Femme fatal! I never really saw it but he is! Classic noir!
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what a delightful mix.
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just in a desperate, stalkerish sort of way... hrm. but what harry did in the last chapter WAS kinda wrong... :[
still-- he didn't deserve to die!
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seriously. loved it though. just... oww. owowow.
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But harry loved draco too darn much, so i had to put him out of his misery - sorry to harry lovers everywhere
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NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
lovely twist, but it's KILLING me!
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Glad that you like the ending - it seemd that the "lovely twist" killed harry more than you :P
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(imagines dead!harry coming back from the grave) ^_^
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