Oh my. I hadn't.. this was not the ending I had expected. not that I had expected anything, but if I had this wouldn't have been it. If you catch my drift. It was one helluva twist I must say. I don't really feel sorry for Harry though. He had it coming. Weird. Normally I would be crying my eyes out by now. I really liked it though. It was unique. And evil!Draco was awesome! I could totally see a wicked gleam in his eyes when he offed Harry.
Careful, i'm flamablelilith1631May 28 2007, 16:56:21 UTC
Omg the first review and you liked it! *sigh of relief* I am fully expecting to be flamed for what i have done to harry
Glad you like draco, i am quite fond of his characterisation, if i do say so myself.
I didnt think the "and then we feel in love after i wiped his memory and we lived happily every after" was very plausible ending...so instead i was a malicious bitch and harry had to suffer for it lol
Thanks for commenting, i love you for not flaming Lilith Slash a day keeps boredom at bay
Re: Careful, i'm flamablesilverferret89May 28 2007, 17:29:51 UTC
"and then we feel in love after i wiped his memory and we lived happily every after" was very plausible ending.. I felt kinda sad for Draco with that ending. It just seemed unfair that he should be submitted to such a relationship. It didn't sit me well. So I'm really relieved that he found out, and didn't let Harry get of the hook^^
Re: Careful, i'm flamablelilith1631May 28 2007, 17:37:08 UTC
Right there with you, the majority of people said they wanted a happy ending, but if i wrote a we're-a-couple ending then what would the body of the fic been about? "draco and harry went shopping, had some lunch, shagged a bit, bought a puppy and lived in the country. Fin."
My first draft of the opening scene had draco almost described like a rape victim. I tried to keep his carefree...ness as much as possible throughout. draco is a slut. and a slut is like a bird. and a bird should be free.
i sympathised with harry in this fic, but that may be because i characterised him to be like a needy puppy...
Re: Careful, i'm flamablesilverferret89May 28 2007, 17:48:41 UTC
"draco and harry went shopping, had some lunch, shagged a bit, bought a puppy and lived in the country. Fin." That would just have been bloody awful! Urgh, it would not have fitted in at all! Changing it from what it originally was to something lovey-dovey. Dreadful.
i sympathised with harry in this fic, but that may be because i characterised him to be like a needy puppy... *giggles* Uhuh. Definitely. But nice, needy puppy's shouldn't obliviate their masters. BAD, bad things will happen to them then.
It was one helluva twist I must say. I don't really feel sorry for Harry though. He had it coming.
Weird. Normally I would be crying my eyes out by now.
I really liked it though. It was unique. And evil!Draco was awesome! I could totally see a wicked gleam in his eyes when he offed Harry.
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Glad you like draco, i am quite fond of his characterisation, if i do say so myself.
I didnt think the "and then we feel in love after i wiped his memory and we lived happily every after" was very plausible ending...so instead i was a malicious bitch and harry had to suffer for it lol
Thanks for commenting, i love you for not flaming
Lilith
Slash a day keeps boredom at bay
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I felt kinda sad for Draco with that ending. It just seemed unfair that he should be submitted to such a relationship. It didn't sit me well. So I'm really relieved that he found out, and didn't let Harry get of the hook^^
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My first draft of the opening scene had draco almost described like a rape victim. I tried to keep his carefree...ness as much as possible throughout. draco is a slut. and a slut is like a bird. and a bird should be free.
i sympathised with harry in this fic, but that may be because i characterised him to be like a needy puppy...
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That would just have been bloody awful! Urgh, it would not have fitted in at all! Changing it from what it originally was to something lovey-dovey. Dreadful.
i sympathised with harry in this fic, but that may be because i characterised him to be like a needy puppy...
*giggles* Uhuh. Definitely. But nice, needy puppy's shouldn't obliviate their masters. BAD, bad things will happen to them then.
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