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Crit Post
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[Footsteps, quiet, slowly becoming louder until they stop suddenly. There's a sigh.]
Here.
[There's a few loud clicks as the communicator is picked up.] Just...like before.
What have I missed?
[ooc: heading off to class. replies will be later, sorry]
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I think I'm sick.
I can't stop sleeping at odd times and I have a terrible headache. ...I doubt there's even medicine.
Is there any sort of medicine here? I don't...think I need a doctor, but some painkillers wouldn't hurt. Even if I doubt I'll get that. It's a dead city, Subaru, not Tokyo.
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[voice]
-- I know I shouldn't worry anymore. That's why I'm glad you left, Hokuto. But why...
Mmh. I suppose. I thought Nill would like them. I can find you ... Oh.
[There's a very long and uncomfortable silence, which is finally followed by a sigh. The rustle of fabric is too soft to hear, even if he's hugging nothing but a ghost.]
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[voice]
Hokuto, I found some more fabric for you. You can use it to fix the strap on your --
[Silence. There's no sound for several moments, then a clatter as the communicator hits the floor. If you listen closely, you can hear Subaru calling 'Hokuto! Hokuto!' from a distance. This continues for several minutes until silence overtakes the post and it times ( Read more... ) -
[voice] | [comment log]
Now that my shoulder doesn't hurt so much...
...Nill, do you think you'd like to take that walk now? I have a scarf here you can borrow, if you'd like.
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Nill, when you're finished with Chii, would you like to come with me to the shopping district? Hokuto needs some more fabric and I want to see if there's anymore sewing supplies she can use. I haven't seen you in a while, and it would be nice to talk.
And I suppose I'll look for gifts or...something. Is there anything worth salvaging to give to ( Read more... ) -
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Why are there so many of these things around here? Aren't there other things to be concerned about?
...I'm not foolish enough to just walk under there. Leave that for the couples.