Fic: Unforgiveable

[liebesfic]

Title: Unforgiveable
Author: liebedance
Characters/Pairings: Lily/James
Rating: Dark PG-13
Word Count: ~2,000
Genre: Drama (and, yes, a bit of Angst)
Summary James Potter is funny and foolhardy and brave and loyal. He doesn’t run away from post-battle Order meetings or ignore his best friend’s pleas to stay and talk. He doesn’t drink alone, in the dark. And

Comments

[bluealoe]

*flails* Leah!!! The edits you did make it even better! I love the line about Obliviate, and about how he didn't know the reality would be so bad, and Lily loving him but he doesn't love himself, and it's just SQUEE!

[liebesfic]

Thank you, dear <3

[imagined_away]

Oh dear, James. I think Lily will forgive you this once.
Casting an Obliviate on yourself while drunk seems like a terrible idea so I'm glad he decided against it

[liebesfic]

Thanks!

Yeah, Obliviate while drunk would be a horrible idea. I don't wanna think about what would've happened to our James.

I could get up on my soap box about my James, but you prolly don't want that :P

[eprime]

This is wonderfully written, and so real, wars are fought by a bunch of kids. James' pain is tangible.

[liebesfic]

Thank you :)

[ravenne_crion]

Wow, this was a really good peice and so true to what they had to be going through and...well, it's probably a little heartless to say it was "enjoyable" to see James like that but it held my interest. Sorry James! You must suffer for my amusement.

[liebesfic]

Well, I'm glad that seeing James in pain isn't enjoyable, but I know what you mean. Thanks!

[gmariam]

Wonderful story, I'm so glad you posted it at the J/L community so I could read it. Most of the J/L I read (and write) is more about the romance, and this was a great change, to read about something so dark and difficult for James. So sad, and probably so true, for them to be fighting a war at such a young age. Great job!

[liebesfic]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. And also, thanks for friending my fic journal!!!

[gmariam]

I've enjoyed your writing since discovering it over the summer during the Lily/James ficfest you guys hosted. That was so much fun. :) I figured I'd never remember to check if you had new stories, so I clicked the friend button to be sure I'd see them when you do. Not sure if you want to read the day-to-day of my rather mundane life on my journal, lol, but I did I take museme87's advice and created a fic journal of my own a few weeks ago if you just wanted to read stories instead. ;)

[liebesfic]

I wish I'd helped to host LJfest, but that was all museme87 and klose. I can't take credit from those two at all.

Well, I friended you with both my fic journal and my life journal. What's your fic journal?

And I'm touched that you enjoy my writing :)