Miguel/Gonzalo slashfic

[lhuneldaiel]

Title: Unforgettable
Author: Lhuneldaiel
Pairings: Miguel Torres/Gonzalo Higuaín, mentions of Sergio Ramos/Fernando Gago/Miguel Torres threesomes
Fandom: Football Slash
Rating: R, graphic male/male sex
Word count: 3.278 words.
Summary: Offering Miguel a place to crash after a night on the town, doesn't end the way Gonzalo (innocently) expected it

Comments

[just_jenni]

I just love what you've done with that pic to make it into a banner! It's gorgeous! And gaaaahhhh...I had forgotten about that exercising pic in your icon! And I LOVED that pic! LOL.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this new fic, and this pairing. Your characterization of Miguel is a delight and I love his analytical thinking! And the fact he is such a whore, and has picked up characteristics from both Gago (the predatory, manipulative stuff) and Sergio (the powerful physical presence combined with tenderness).♥

I just love the scene in which Gonza's hand accidentally goes down the leg of Migi's boxers and Miguel manipulates that into a great grope! LMAO.

I love Gonzalo's initial reluctance and then his ability to just thrust himself into the situation (pardon my pun - LOL). It is just like him on the pitch! When he got his chance he grabbed at it and scored! (Whoops! Sorry! I can't help it.)

This was absolutely my favourite line in my favourite section:
'Toss Miguel around in the sack and he'll be yours forever', Gago had once

[lhuneldaiel]

That pic was screaming to be a banner! There's so much warmth and intimacy in the touch and the way they look at each other.

Miguel has certainly learned from those two corrupters, hahaha! I love writing him as a very intelligent person with an analytical mind. He'll observe, analyse, then make his move. Plus, he's curious.

I just love the scene in which Gonza's hand accidentally goes down the leg of Migi's boxers and Miguel manipulates that into a great grope! LMAO.
Boys. How they love to put one another in embarrassing situations that involve either genitals or ass. Migi made great use of the situation ;-)

I love Gonzalo's initial reluctance and then his ability to just thrust himself into the situation
Who could resist Migi? Not even hunky, manly Gonza can.

OMG, but that is such a fantastic revelation! It's so Migi and so Fer as well!
It's very powerful, it says so much about his kink ;-)

Thanks again for beta-ing! Forgive me that it was such a hassle *giggles*

I love you, woman &hearts

[just_jenni]

That pic makes a gorgeous banner!

I love your version of Miguel, with his intelligence, his analytical mind, his curiosity and his whorish sexuality!

When boys act like boys it is a HUGE turn-on for us girls! Me, anyway! LOL. I loved that scene so much!

I am sure there's NO-ONE who could resist Migi!

How I love kinks. And Migi's kink is awesome. So sexy. He's too much.

OMG are you kidding me? I LOVE beta-ing! Especially for you! And it wasn't a hassle at all! I just annoyed myself for being nitpicky, but it was like starting untangling string or something. Once you start, you can't stop! LOL.

I love you too, babe.♥

[lhuneldaiel]

I love your version of Miguel, with his intelligence, his analytical mind, his curiosity and his whorish sexuality!
Thank you! He is such a delight to write, because he's so smart and so slutty at the same time. Beauty and brains, hahaha!

When boys act like boys it is a HUGE turn-on for us girls! Me, anyway!
Me, too. They can be so entertaining.

*grins* thanks for reassuring me... I wouldn't want you to 'facepalm' every time you receive fic from me!

&hearts

[an_inside_job]

Oh my God Lhun, this is just absolutely delicious.

This pairing, the way you have written them, seriously delicious & hot.

"Do you really want to forget this?" Miguel whispered sultrily. "Because it could be unforgettable."
Nghhhh, this line killed me!!

♥ ♥

I would change the highlighted section to: 'without allowing Miguel time to marvel...' This way, the point of view is not switched suddenly from Miguel to Gonzalo and then back to Miguel.
I think you probably meant to delete this line before you posted though ;)

[lhuneldaiel]

Thanks, bb! I had to write them, the way they were looking at each other in the pic I used for the banner was driving me nuts!

Nghhhh, this line killed me!!
Seductive!Miguel at his best ;-)

Thanks for pointing that out! MS Word was playing tricks on me!

Thanks for the feedback, sweetie &hearts

[lhuneldaiel]

I really needed this after screaming and crying over Pip during the match today
I am so worried about him! My heart just broke seeing him in such pain :(
Aww, Migi was there &hearts

Miguel now the experienced one and Pipita unknowingly lured into unexpected pleasures, but of course ending up the very enthusiastic participant.
Miguel is pretty irresistible, and he has the upper hand. He seduced 'poor Pip' before the Argentine knew what was happening.
They're lovely together, aren't they? They are going to wear each other out. I don't think this will be the only fic about them I'll ever write *grins*

I love the snoring "subplot".
Thanks! It caused some banter, and you probably know how much I love writing banter. LOL, snoring wakes me up too (sometimes even my own snoring, hahaha)

Thank you for commenting &hearts

[aglaiya]

You can write them all. I'm always enjoying your wonderful fics.

[lhuneldaiel]

Aww, thank you, sweetie &hearts

[doublemyfun]

You know what?

I think this is the best fiction you've written since Sergio first met David in the locker room. The dialogue between these two just flows....and it's sensual and hilarious all at the same time. Loved the pillow fight LOL.

*blows kisses*

[lhuneldaiel]

Oh my, I'm speechless *___*

Thank you so much! It was so much fun to write them, especially the dialogue. Mmm, I love watching boys play-fight, you'll find it in many of my fics ;-)

Thank you ever so much for the feedback *smoooooch*

[doublemyfun]

Are you speechless because of the compliment or because I actually read a story about Miguel? LOL.

[lhuneldaiel]

Hahaha! Both! I must confess I had wondered if you'd read it, knowing you're not into Miguel XD