Oh My God! It was so intense! The whole chapter! Snake/Denna and C/D/K! I’m speechless once more… I’m in love with your dark crazy mind! I think it’s not a complement I think we are completely sick, lol. You create and write this craziness and I’m all excited reading and loving it! Just wow
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haha thanks XD!! Sucks I gotta be quick cuz I'm at Nicci's and of course I have to hide this fic lol. But of course I'm so happy you liked it and will reply at length later!! Oh definitely my mind is sick, dark and totally crazy, I never denied it :P
Yeah I've had my pinky broken and the nail ripped off my toe so I def know what I did to Cara and Denna :O It wasn't the big toe, it was the one next to it but still omfg. Both things were actually accidents along with what happened to my shoulder but wow (felt I should edit so u didn't think Kenzie deliberately tortured me like that omg) But anyway yeah anytime I can, I try to write things I know. Snake's mouth is "poisonous"...she definitely has a way with communication. Oops for tossing your feelings about her (did you expect anything less? hehe) lol you should never get comfortable with a Mistress :D Be back later
Oh, broken pinky! I've had my big toe broken once, a bicycle accident, it hurt like hell, lol. Never had the ripped off nail but I again accidentally drove in a piece of wood under my nail wasn't nice feeling, haha!
I like how you added that yours were accidents, lol! No, I don't think that Kenzie was a total monster and tortured you endlessly.
You torture our girls perfectly but then a little detail like the broken toes come out and I like, ugh, I had it once I wonder if the bear had it also, lol.
I know that you are a merciless Mistress and I will never get comfy here. :D But I will be ok if Denna will kill Snake or spare her, no problem whatsoever. I WILL have a problem though if you will kill off my baby Denna, capiche?
OK, I really-really liked the hot-spring C/K scene! Lol at Cara cradling Kahlan on stretched arms! "I don't know," Kahlan admitted. "You can hold me closer." Awwww, K is so cute there!
Cara’s “I will protect you from everything” was kinda chilling, like, she would protect her from the rescue also.
It was sweet of her to use to bring a wizard when Dahlia was sick. A nice touch!
"There is nothing "bad" about training, Kahlan." Crazy Cara is crazy. She definitely still bad on the head. And it’s so hard to talk to her. Her reaction is very unpredictable and she goes from calm to insane in a split second. Poor Kahlan had to be so careful.
I always love their childhood memories! Idk, they are so precious! They affect me so much, I get so emotional I feel embarrassed, lol. An orange tree memory <3
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lol at the hot spring scene...omg I felt so cheesy but they needed to bond a little so...I'm glad it didn't seem like total corn. Kahlan loved it :D I am also impressed that you picked up on the chilling undertones of Cara's "I will protect you from everything." I wasn't so sure that would come across but yeah definitely
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Nope, the hot spring scene wasn't cheesy at all. I liked intimidating Cara even after the good massage she can't relax and still so dangerous. And glimpses of her sweet side are really are the glimpses. I feel practically happy when I see them. Her being mean, oh, that I don't have to look for just find a random scene with her and she will be mean there, lol.
Haha, bear, of course I remember the discussion! Angelicsinner is very kind to her Cara. Lexa_red - not so much :D I believe that your Cara is proud of her training, she's hidden her pain and her fears and remembers only the fact that she overcame all obstacles and very proud of herself. imho.
Yeah, I agree that even the best girls sometimes have the worst moments She just told it so like it was very natural for her to be mean. And why Dahlia didn't tell her about the broken arm? It's just too sounds too M'S. But maybe she didn't want Cara to feel guilty? Yeah, I guess so. I didn't think about it, lol! I would have told the whole world that my arm is broken, haha
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Continue commenting, lol. Snake/Denna. Another terrific scene! "The moon just passed over us." "Everything passes over you, doesn't it?" Snake such a prick, she just couldn’t agree or don’t comment, no she just HAS to torture my baby!
Speaking of the moon. Tonight is going to be a lunar eclipse approximately from the after midnight till 4 in the morning. If your sky is clear you could observe it from your backyard for sometime after the midnight. We have heavily clouded sky tonight. I’ll check it out after the midnight anyway, hehe.
“This is no home” Yep! Denna is a strong M’S but she has a brain and of course The Temple is no home! An idiot Cara keeps telling Dahlia that she is going to take her home to the Temple! Arrrrggg! Why she is such an idiot!
I liked so much when they talked about Denna’s mother. Denna is fearful of Snake but she keeps telling her the truth and she still has the courage to defy her. Maybe because she is totally lost and uncertain about anything anymore? She was like the window, caught shiftless between
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lol Snake is prick!! hahahaha I laughed forever at that, I'm so serious XD Just totally true!! Snake is the easiest character for me to write omg what does that say about me?! But nah I obviously try to make her an older, tougher version of Cara but of course a Cara that never had a Dahlia. I still feel like Cara would learn from her and that Cara loved her Mistress and was eager to learn from her
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Snake is the easiest character for me to write omg what does that say about me?! LOL! It says something, absolutely! I'm not going to analyze it though, haha, cuz I like you and Snake, it tell something about me too. I like that thought that Snake is kind of version of Cara's who grew up without Dahlia. But she is not. Cara is a simple honest creature and Snake is a professor of the human, especially children, psychology. Cara is more like a fighter and adventurous type.
Oh, eclipse! It was eerie, when slowly the bright moon had been overtaken by the shadow. It was cold and strange and quiet.
I suspect why Cara believes that the Temple is her home. Dahlia. Right now she doesn't realize that her home is Dahlia. And baby Denna has no one :( She tries to hang to herself :(
It's also like she was complimenting Dahlia in her own weird way. I like this paradox! And I think I get it.
OK, back to our insane trio! Cara was so quiet and silent I started to feel anxious, lol. It felt like calm before the coming hurricane.
Lol, horny Cara is horny. At least she tried to separate them from D by wall of hair <3! Like, if I can’t see you; you don’t exist! All their arguments start with Dahlia defending Kahlan. It’s like K is a troubled girl and parents fight because of her, haha
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I was thinking the exact same thing about Kahlan and her warring parents!! XD wow. It didn't start out as intentional but then lol. Idk if Cara started that cuz she wanted a reaction from Dahlia or not, I really just don't know! I tried REALLY had to imagine Cara totally iniating the whole thing but that was the closest I could get. I'm so relieved you liked it cuz yeah I was worried. I was having a hard time with the idea that Cara fully has that within her to realize it's the best thing for her. She is just so proud and set in her ways and would never completely understand how much she has lost and what it would take to regain even a fraction of it. Also, she doesn't possess the communication skills to convince Dahlia either imho. But, of course, some part of her either gambles or knows that Dahlia would protect Kahlan so knew that was her best bet. She's strategic lol
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Idk if Cara started that cuz she wanted a reaction from Dahlia or not, I really just don't know! It's just hilarious how they act on their own! I believe you! Especially Cara, she has a mind of her own, haha!
Also, she doesn't possess the communication skills to convince Dahlia either imho. But, of course, some part of her either gambles or knows that Dahlia would protect Kahlan so knew that was her best bet. She's strategic lol. Yep, she couldn't convince Dahlia that the Temple is their home. She could convince Kahlan though, by scaring her, haha. And she knew that Dahlia would defend Kahlan!
Seriously, I loooved the enraged Dahlia, she was so sexy, lol
Kahlan is strong physically but she still haven't recover from the breaking and also Cara totally scares her. Now Dahlia also! Lol, poor Kahlan!
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Yeah I've had my pinky broken and the nail ripped off my toe so I def know what I did to Cara and Denna :O It wasn't the big toe, it was the one next to it but still omfg. Both things were actually accidents along with what happened to my shoulder but wow (felt I should edit so u didn't think Kenzie deliberately tortured me like that omg) But anyway yeah anytime I can, I try to write things I know. Snake's mouth is "poisonous"...she definitely has a way with communication. Oops for tossing your feelings about her (did you expect anything less? hehe) lol you should never get comfortable with a Mistress :D Be back later
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I like how you added that yours were accidents, lol! No, I don't think that Kenzie was a total monster and tortured you endlessly.
You torture our girls perfectly but then a little detail like the broken toes come out and I like, ugh, I had it once I wonder if the bear had it also, lol.
I know that you are a merciless Mistress and I will never get comfy here. :D But I will be ok if Denna will kill Snake or spare her, no problem whatsoever. I WILL have a problem though if you will kill off my baby Denna, capiche?
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Lol at Cara cradling Kahlan on stretched arms!
"I don't know," Kahlan admitted. "You can hold me closer." Awwww, K is so cute there!
Cara’s “I will protect you from everything” was kinda chilling, like, she would protect her from the rescue also.
It was sweet of her to use to bring a wizard when Dahlia was sick. A nice touch!
"There is nothing "bad" about training, Kahlan." Crazy Cara is crazy. She definitely still bad on the head.
And it’s so hard to talk to her. Her reaction is very unpredictable and she goes from calm to insane in a split second. Poor Kahlan had to be so careful.
I always love their childhood memories! Idk, they are so precious! They affect me so much, I get so emotional I feel embarrassed, lol.
An orange tree memory <3 ( ... )
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Haha, bear, of course I remember the discussion! Angelicsinner is very kind to her Cara. Lexa_red - not so much :D
I believe that your Cara is proud of her training, she's hidden her pain and her fears and remembers only the fact that she overcame all obstacles and very proud of herself. imho.
Yeah, I agree that even the best girls sometimes have the worst moments She just told it so like it was very natural for her to be mean. And why Dahlia didn't tell her about the broken arm? It's just too sounds too M'S. But maybe she didn't want Cara to feel guilty? Yeah, I guess so. I didn't think about it, lol! I would have told the whole world that my arm is broken, haha ( ... )
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Snake/Denna. Another terrific scene!
"The moon just passed over us." "Everything passes over you, doesn't it?" Snake such a prick, she just couldn’t agree or don’t comment, no she just HAS to torture my baby!
Speaking of the moon. Tonight is going to be a lunar eclipse approximately from the after midnight till 4 in the morning. If your sky is clear you could observe it from your backyard for sometime after the midnight. We have heavily clouded sky tonight. I’ll check it out after the midnight anyway, hehe.
“This is no home” Yep! Denna is a strong M’S but she has a brain and of course The Temple is no home! An idiot Cara keeps telling Dahlia that she is going to take her home to the Temple! Arrrrggg! Why she is such an idiot!
I liked so much when they talked about Denna’s mother. Denna is fearful of Snake but she keeps telling her the truth and she still has the courage to defy her. Maybe because she is totally lost and uncertain about anything anymore?
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I like that thought that Snake is kind of version of Cara's who grew up without Dahlia. But she is not. Cara is a simple honest creature and Snake is a professor of the human, especially children, psychology. Cara is more like a fighter and adventurous type.
Oh, eclipse! It was eerie, when slowly the bright moon had been overtaken by the shadow. It was cold and strange and quiet.
I suspect why Cara believes that the Temple is her home. Dahlia. Right now she doesn't realize that her home is Dahlia.
And baby Denna has no one :( She tries to hang to herself :(
It's also like she was complimenting Dahlia in her own weird way. I like this paradox! And I think I get it.
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Lol, horny Cara is horny. At least she tried to separate them from D by wall of hair <3! Like, if I can’t see you; you don’t exist! All their arguments start with Dahlia defending Kahlan. It’s like K is a troubled girl and parents fight because of her, haha ( ... )
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Also, she doesn't possess the communication skills to convince Dahlia either imho. But, of course, some part of her either gambles or knows that Dahlia would protect Kahlan so knew that was her best bet. She's strategic lol. Yep, she couldn't convince Dahlia that the Temple is their home. She could convince Kahlan though, by scaring her, haha. And she knew that Dahlia would defend Kahlan!
Seriously, I loooved the enraged Dahlia, she was so sexy, lol
Kahlan is strong physically but she still haven't recover from the breaking and also Cara totally scares her. Now Dahlia also! Lol, poor Kahlan!
haha your fluffy threesome dreams XD!! <333 Yes ( ... )
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