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leen1707

Like Ships at Sea... (4/5)

Sep 11, 2013 03:57

Title: Like Ships at Sea... (4/5)

Pairing: Akame

Word count: ~35000

Rating: NC-17

Genre/Warnings: AU, angst, fluff, smut (and everything in between).

Disclaimer: This story is a product of my imagination. Any parallels with real persons or events are pure coincidence.

Notes:Initially written for ( Read more... )

fanfiction, kame

Comments 3

edogawa May 2 2012, 12:40:33 UTC

From now on, I feel a little seasick myself.. I’m not sure I could survive a storm when I’m on a ship ( ... )

leen1707 May 7 2012, 15:20:51 UTC

Let's say the storm part draws a lot on my personal experience, and stop it at that. Unluckily for me - no "Jin"-figure was present on board of my ship((

I'm so glad that you liked the building of the atmosphere in the morning, and Jin is a lot of a drama queen - he's already written a worst case scenario in his head, poor boy, no wonder he cannot quite reconcile it with a willing turtle in a bathrobe outside his door.

My pet moment in this chapter - if you are interested - is Kame's insecurity about beeing considered fat if he isn't stick-thin, it was one of those moments that write themselves and it makes me just want to squeeze them both they are so cute in it))

edogawa May 14 2012, 20:27:06 UTC

That was one of the best moment! I forgot to write it..

It's so human, so real. It could be a sentence anybody would say.. it's so natural.

It's very interesting the way one moment can touch you deeply, even if it's only one sentence. But in that moment, the story stops to be something you are reading and become something you are feeling inside.

Sorry for my late reply.. RL asking my full attention.. O.o