I TOO WAS A BABY FANGIRL

[lazulisong]

Part One of Meg's Awful College Novel here, read and review plz omgkthx :(

Comments

[uminohikari]

XD, random formatting change?

This is better than 99% of fiction published today. TAKE THAT AS YOU WILL.

[lazulisong]

I missed a bit when I was changing it =w=

well, I'll give you that point and only because PEOPLE HAVE SHIT PUBLISHED ALL THE TIMEEEEE.

[rhythmia]

*waves* I read it!

The world building is interesting and I can sense the potential in it. Fluffy cats with wings! I kinda like the feel of things sort of based on anime conventions blended into a story with more Western conventions.

Kieran's depression seemed a bit abrupt, though. ^^;; But I imagine, given how old this story is, you're not really needing concrit for it. :P So I'll end with saying that the flow of it drew me along, nice read. ^_^

pee ess: can I say I'm rather enjoying your epic adventures of Younger Human Female versus Cat (and occasionally Dog)?

[kiyoshi_chan]

Okay, while I think there were bits that could be improved on, considering you were nineteen, I thought that was pretty damn good. :O

[crysiana]

There's a lot to be worked on, but the worldbuilding is AWESOME, like it always is with you.