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lazulisong

[12 Days 9/12] [arashi] [aibajun] the first five times 4/?

Jan 03, 2008 21:38

THIS THING, IT IS A THING LIKE A MOLD. IT KEEPS SPREADING

file is at 9288 words. send booze. sob. oh god only half done if that. i want to dieeeeee..

TITLE: The First Five Times
PAIRING: Arashi, AibaJun, Ohmiya secondary
DISCLAIMER: Not mine. Oh god, not mine.
RATING: R because I freaking made Matsujun a freaking hooker you guys. Please note ( Read more... )

fic, horrible things i've done to matsujun, aibajun, the first five times, arashi, 12 days 2007

Comments 32

beckerbell January 4 2008, 05:53:00 UTC

"Yay!" said Aiba, beaming.
"Yay!" echoed Rie-chan, grinning like a shark.

YAY! I love this fic! ♥

*thoughtful* That's 8,000 words post down, right? I think this is the longest thing you've written in awhile? (And how long was Icebreakers again? The fic that haunts you even to this day?)

lazulisong January 4 2008, 06:00:15 UTC

last time was Nano 2006 for Storm System, which was about 20000, I think.

Uh. Icebreakers was .... right around 39,000? and My December was right about 34,000 ---

AND IF YOU THINK I'M GOING TO WRITE FORTY THOUSAND WORDS ABOUT HOOKERS YOU ARE OUT OF YOUR MIND.

beckerbell January 4 2008, 06:06:29 UTC

Hmmm. No, no, I wasn't going to say that the hookerfic would be that long, just that I was wondering how long this is compared to your other longerfics.

Really. :D :D :D :D

lazulisong January 4 2008, 06:07:59 UTC

15thmooon January 4 2008, 06:17:54 UTC

My name's Shibata Rie,
UNEXPECTED , BUT AMAZING!

The mention of Koyama/Shige ♥ !

alphie_damiek January 4 2008, 06:18:05 UTC

In the Sea Systems exhibit, a pair of otters were floating on the surface of the water.

"My God," said Jun, fascinated. "It's Nino and Ohno."

THOSE WERE MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY. *____* thats fabulous.

"Mommy," said a child beside them, "why do both the otters have boy names?"

of course we refused to think that those were otters of different genders. XDD

She smiled again, a flashing grin with too many teeth.

shibata rie's smile can blind children. >_>

cant wait for the next chapter. *slides you a beer*

gothicauthor January 4 2008, 06:25:19 UTC

The otters drifted apart and then bumped together again. One of them woke up a little, reached out and fussily took the other's paw in his own again and then, to all appearances, fell back into contented sleep.

...Why do I think Shige is the fussy one. XD XD XD

Gothic Author

lazulisong January 4 2008, 06:26:44 UTC

oh probably XD but koyamama might want to know where shige is too!

gothicauthor January 4 2008, 06:51:35 UTC

XD XD XD I don't know... For some reason, it just feels like the kind of thing that would randomly wake Shige up? I can totally see him frowning in a half-asleep state, groping around for Koyama's hand, and then just conking back out once he finds it.

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kiyoshi_chan January 4 2008, 06:33:51 UTC

I can't even CHOOSE which exhibit was my favourite because you made them ALL fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun.