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Jealousy: PART XXXI, PART XXXII

Mar 15, 2006 10:40

Title: Jealousy: PART XXXI, PART XXXII

Author: laughs_muses (fic journal)

Pairing: Draco Malfoy/Harry Potter

Rating: PG-13, R

Disclaimer: No, none of these characters are mine. If they were mine I wouldn’t be working absurd hours in a coffee shop, now would I? Nup, I’d be cruising around in my Merc with little HP flags on the bonnet and…*dreams*

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Comments 38

saratheflute March 15 2006, 01:16:10 UTC

:D

It was perfect. Do not fret.

Just make me more...

fomp March 15 2006, 01:25:58 UTC

Me and Harry have the same sense of humor with the 'ride' thing.
And with the same taste in men.
Except I fancy more like Harry.
And it's not like he could like himself.

...

What was I talking about?

ok. so.
1) ♥.
2) THAT WAS MORE THAN MY EXPECTATIONS.
3) does this mean it's almost over?!
4) if not, CAT FIGHT, YES?! or not. I don't care. you could show a picture of puke and I'd still love you. demand more fic, yes, but love all the same.

fomp March 15 2006, 01:26:49 UTC

OH AND SORRY FOR COMMENTING AGAIN BUT,
the suspense gap again. XD. it's like we share a brain.

anonymous March 15 2006, 01:34:37 UTC

these new parts have me feeling quite 'sparkish'
i love this story...
please update soon!!

penguin88 March 15 2006, 01:39:09 UTC

No need to be nervous. Kiss scenes are probably the hardest to reproduce in any sort of writing because it is hard to describe something that is pretty brief and that is basically mashing lips together and to make it sexy and comprehensive. I thought that you did it quite nicely - I especially liked your description of Harry's attempt in comparison to Draco's ( ... )

enchanted_jae March 16 2006, 07:09:44 UTC

Twenty points to penguin88 for using the word canoodle!

*applauds*

cheezitthief March 15 2006, 01:41:16 UTC

gack. cuteness attack. totally wonderful and mood-brightening.

lovely! can't wait for more!