Jealousy: PART XXXI, PART XXXII

[laughs_muses]

Title: Jealousy: PART XXXI, PART XXXII

Author: laughs_muses (fic journal)

Pairing: Draco Malfoy/Harry Potter

Rating: PG-13, R

Disclaimer: No, none of these characters are mine. If they were mine I wouldn’t be working absurd hours in a coffee shop, now would I? Nup, I’d be cruising around in my Merc with little HP flags on the bonnet and…*dreams*

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Comments

[penguin88]

No need to be nervous. Kiss scenes are probably the hardest to reproduce in any sort of writing because it is hard to describe something that is pretty brief and that is basically mashing lips together and to make it sexy and comprehensive. I thought that you did it quite nicely - I especially liked your description of Harry's attempt in comparison to Draco's.

I was so happy when I saw that you had posted this update because a)It is this awesome fic that I have been following since the beginning, and b) because I knew that it had to be THE update - the big one where Harry and Draco canoodle and agree upon their multiple interest. It was fluffier than I imagined it would be, primarily because of the angsty tone of all of the previous chapters. Yet, although the sweetness was unexpected, it was definitely welcome. It served to prove that your fluff is just as good as your angst.

I'm sure that their new situation will open a whole new can of worms (labeled Pansy and Ginny), but I hope that they manage to stay together (and I will probably angst about if they split). Oh, and on a final note - sparkish? And broom riding? You are fantastic.

[enchanted_jae]

Twenty points to penguin88 for using the word canoodle!

*applauds*