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Murphy's Law [Chap 1]

Jun 14, 2007 23:11

Title: Murphy’s Law
Length: Series
Author: LadyDusk_Raku
Rating: PG-13
Genre: M-preg, Crack, Humor
Pairings: Jaeho, Yoosu, MinFood (XD)
Summary: Life is not easy for Micky Yoochun. His family is insane, his school life is complete crap, and every time he turns around he and his boyfriend are having problems. One day he has got to stop saying, ‘What ( Read more... )

fics, yoosu, murphy's law, crack, mpreg, jaeho

Comments 53

flagrant_quoth June 15 2007, 04:03:03 UTC

Ooh, my gawd. Ne-Nee-Chan. You’re brilliant. Dear god.

This is just. The best ever. I’ve been banned from the internet for days, going through a miserable withdrawl. My Daddy took away my journal, my hobby, my life. XD I don’t mean to sound so dramatic, but I felt I was just wasting away with my day. I felt so frustrated I could just cry because I was so upset, but your writing absolutely cheered me up. Every time I see a new piece from you, I’m just either breathless from laughter or somber and moved by your compelling work. You know, I never have disobeyed my father when he told me specifically I was not to use my laptop ( ... )

flagrant_quoth June 15 2007, 04:03:19 UTC

[[Here we go. XD]]

He stood there, gaping, as he watched the lithe figure fleeing down the street and around the corner; the fluffy blond head of hair vanishing within seconds. After all the nerve of him giving that speech about loyalty and sticking by each other a few weeks ago, he turned tail and ran at the first sign of danger!

*GUFFAW AND FALLS OFF CHAIR!* AAAAH. XD I could see the scene completely in my mind. Your detail is so distinct. Whenever I read your pieces, I can see every action, sentiment, dialogue just reeling through my head as if I was watching a film. And oh my god. I just about died in my chair when I saw that Jaejoong was the mother. Absolutely priceless. *laugh!* I was puzzled at first, wondering if Jaejoong was the neighbor, but then it bulldozed over me. Yes, I was so happy when I found out Jae was the Mommy! XD! I made this weird mental connection in my head: “Oh my gawd. Jung. Yoochun’s last name. Jung. Jae. Umma. That means. Yes! Yunho’s the Daaad!Ahaaaha! I’m feeling so giddy right now. You can’t imagine ( ... )

flagrant_quoth June 15 2007, 04:06:16 UTC

...And now, I can safely run away before my Pops catches me. >.>;; Dang it. ;_; My life is over! XDD *clings to Nee-Chan's waist* I laaaab yooou!

Imouto,
Mae-Mae. [[And what are you talking about? XD Of course I know your name. >D Bwaahaahaa! *kukukurubshandstogether*]]

ladydusk_raku June 16 2007, 03:43:07 UTC

OMK, Imouto ( ... )

redmist_23 June 15 2007, 07:27:34 UTC

This is so cute. Didn't expect Jae to be the scary Umma.
Su running off scared. Hungry biting Minnie. This is good.

Add me. I wanna read more.

Update soon.

ladydusk_raku June 15 2007, 20:40:13 UTC

I added you~ ^ ^

Ah, I totally forgot you're the author of Undercover Love! I remember beacause when I first started to read it my computer died on me. =( (Maybe now I can actually read it XD)

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you think it's good =D I really plan to work on this so no worries on updates so far.

tumi18 June 15 2007, 08:41:33 UTC

jaejoong's scary when pregnant >.<
bad changmin for telling what micky's doing... *steals cookies*

ladydusk_raku June 15 2007, 21:17:59 UTC

Lol. Minnie still thinks he's the baby of the family, poor thing. His loyalty lies with the cookie holder. XD Yes, Umma!Jae is indeed an overkill with the moods when he's preggy XD Thanks for reading. Watch out for Minnie when you're stealing those cookies >.>

jjong_lover June 15 2007, 09:48:30 UTC

Chocolate chip cookie…before dinner…‘deer caught in headlights’ expression…guilty look like that of the little rat he was…it could only mean one thing…
hahahhahahhaahahahahahhaaha.. very cute way of decribing minnie indeed..
hahahahahhahahahhhaahhaahaha jae is pregnant?? hahahahaha
omg your story is full of cracks.. i was laughing to myself in front of my screen... ahahahahhahaahahahaha

ladydusk_raku June 15 2007, 21:27:45 UTC

-grin- I'm so glad you liked it. ^ ^ It inspires me to write more and more. It'll get more and more crackier. =P

twiglet71 June 15 2007, 09:59:47 UTC

OMG, This cracked me up!It's Set me up for the day, so thank you very much. Can't wait to see Micky's Appa. Is he gonna be as mad as the rest of them. Update soon - pleeeease!! xxx
P.s. Gonna friend you so I can read you cool ficsxx

ladydusk_raku June 15 2007, 21:34:59 UTC

Hahaha, I'm glad to hear that XD Crack is a good way to start the day lol. (How wrong is that sentence) Ooh, Hmm, I think Micky's Appa will make an appearance next chapter, the outline of that one is being written out so we'll see how that goes. =P I will, if anything, lookout for another new story and updates on this ^ ^Thanks for reading~!