Murphy's Law [Chap 1]

[ladydusk_raku]

Title: Murphy’s Law
Length: Series
Author: LadyDusk_Raku
Rating: PG-13
Genre: M-preg, Crack, Humor
Pairings: Jaeho, Yoosu, MinFood  (XD)
Summary: Life is not easy for Micky Yoochun. His family is insane, his school life is complete crap, and every time he turns around he and his boyfriend are having problems. One day he has got to stop saying, ‘What

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Ooh, my gawd. Ne-Nee-Chan. You’re brilliant. Dear god.

This is just. The best ever. I’ve been banned from the internet for days, going through a miserable withdrawl. My Daddy took away my journal, my hobby, my life. XD I don’t mean to sound so dramatic, but I felt I was just wasting away with my day. I felt so frustrated I could just cry because I was so upset, but your writing absolutely cheered me up. Every time I see a new piece from you, I’m just either breathless from laughter or somber and moved by your compelling work. You know, I never have disobeyed my father when he told me specifically I was not to use my laptop--

[[Okay, all those times where we snuck online to chat during the twilight zone does not count. XD He said not to go online “too late”. …He didn’t say not to go online “after midnight”. Because technically, midnight is the start of AM. Early morning. So it’s not “too late”. *grins mischievously*]]

--but your creations are just too irresistible. Seriously. I was willing to wait the whole week for him to tell me it was alright again to use the computer and that he had forgiven me for my crime. Even though I was internally suffering without reading fan fiction or scrawling on personal ideas, I thought: “Well, eventually I’ll have it back. Even though you weren’t able to work on any of your stories, that’s fine because you’ll get it back eventually.”

Though, when Ate Em-Em checked my e-mail for me [[hey, I wasn’t really “using” the computer]] and I saw your messages, I thought: “Holeh. Friggers. Crud. Dang it. This is the last straw! I’m going online! I’m coming my Ne-Nee-Chan! Waaaait for meeeeee!” And I’m so glad that I finally stopped chickening out and rebelled against his rules. You really don’t know how unbelievably happy I am right now. I’m not even exaggerating. I feel like I’m tearing up just because the first thing I saw was you and your beautiful imagination.

I just. Darn it. I’m so sorry, Ne-Nee-Chan. I’m just speechless. I’m. This is amazing. I remember even when I was younger. As an eleven year-old, I would always look up to you. I remember all those years ago, I would say to myself, “Wow. She’s so amazing…” or “Gosh. She deserves so much more reviews than this.” I would literally be overwhelmed in awe. You were always my inspiration, even today. You always encouraged me and gave me the drive to strive. Still, I aspire to be like you, Ne-Nee-Chan.

And this is just. I love this fan fiction. It’s only the first chapter and you’ve already split my sides in uncontainable laughter. Your humor. You’re a genius. No doubt in my mind whatsoever. You’re an unbelievable author. You radiate talent and an innovation no one else I’ve ever seen top. Truly top-rate skill. You weave a tapestry. Your words and emotion into every sentence are the threads and your tales are the final masterpiece. I’m so happy you’ve posted your first fan fiction --finally-- because I’ve been waiting forever for you to showcase your brilliance.

…*fans self* Ooh. XD;; Boy. The first line was already sensual and sizzling. *does the finger!burn-hiss* I was already feeling the tingles shivering down my spine. Honestly. I have never read a fan fiction in my life that delivered and made me feel that emotion from the first sentence. You are an amazing. Amazing. Beyond amazing author. Ahahaha! Oh my god, when I saw Yoochun’s last name bellowed by his ‘mother’, I was curious. I supposed, oh hey! He could be Yoochun’s cousin. Imagine my surprise.

I laughed out loud when I read Junsu ran away right when Umma entered the scene.

[[Dang it. Character length.]]

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[[Here we go. XD]]

He stood there, gaping, as he watched the lithe figure fleeing down the street and around the corner; the fluffy blond head of hair vanishing within seconds. After all the nerve of him giving that speech about loyalty and sticking by each other a few weeks ago, he turned tail and ran at the first sign of danger!

*GUFFAW AND FALLS OFF CHAIR!* AAAAH. XD I could see the scene completely in my mind. Your detail is so distinct. Whenever I read your pieces, I can see every action, sentiment, dialogue just reeling through my head as if I was watching a film. And oh my god. I just about died in my chair when I saw that Jaejoong was the mother. Absolutely priceless. *laugh!* I was puzzled at first, wondering if Jaejoong was the neighbor, but then it bulldozed over me. Yes, I was so happy when I found out Jae was the Mommy! XD! I made this weird mental connection in my head: “Oh my gawd. Jung. Yoochun’s last name. Jung. Jae. Umma. That means. Yes! Yunho’s the Daaad!”

Ahaaaha! I’m feeling so giddy right now. You can’t imagine how hard I’m trying to control myself just so I don’t get caught on my laptop and even more thoroughly banned from the internet. XD Ooh, man. I love you so much. You put so many beloved characters into your beautiful story. Moonbin, Changmin. God, I love them so much and I’m so happy you’ve put them as a part of the family. And the Cookie Monster!Changmin scene! *dies over and over again!* Chun and Min’s bickering over that cookie, Changmin’s guilt--their interaction completely screams natural brotherly reaction. You’ve made their relationship so realistic, it’s just gorgeous.

Mulling over that fact, he looked at his hand with a frown. Hmm…might need to get a rabies shot…just in case.

XD! You are so witty. I love you.

*sighs happily* I cannot wait to see Yunho enter the plot. As well as the “others” you’ve spoiled me with. XD You better hope I don’t get too curious, or I’ll get information out of you. You may have “All-Knowing-Ne-Nee-Chan!” powers over me that get me to crack, but I’m your loveable, favorite Imouto in the world. *griiiin*

Protective!Jaejoong is absolutely love. Angry hen mother on the loose protecting her little chickies. Ahaahaa!

I’m so honored you were able to trust me to review your work, Ne-Nee-Chan. And I’m so happy you allowed me to get the first glimpse at your astounding, remarkable piece. I’m just. I love you so much, Ne-Nee-Chan. And like I’ve told you before, you scanned this baby like a machine. XD! *laugh!* I did not see one typo whatsoever. Thank you for trusting my judgement and thank you so much for sharing this with me. I’m always in awe of your talent and skill. I feel so honored . Truly. It’s just. You’re remarkable.

You better update soon, Missy. XD Hopefully by then I’ll be out of trouble, but for now Yoochun and I are floating on the same boat: S.S. Grounded. ;__; *embarrassed sweatdrop* …And I’m going to get a kick from the reaction of that little spoiler you’ve got under your sleeve. *smile* I have to say, I love the title by the way. [[Yay for rhymes!]]

I love you so much. I’m sorry I haven’t finished your dedication yet. *hugs tightly* I cannot wait to see more of your work. I hope you’re considering your art pieces too. *wink* XD

I love you! Update, update!

Love Always,
Imouto,
--Mae-Mae.

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...And now, I can safely run away before my Pops catches me. >.>;; Dang it. ;_; My life is over! XDD *clings to Nee-Chan's waist* I laaaab yooou!

Imouto,
Mae-Mae. [[And what are you talking about? XD Of course I know your name. >D Bwaahaahaa! *kukukurubshandstogether*]]

[ladydusk_raku]

OMK, Imouto.
Your reviews always floor me. They put all of my reviews to shame...You know how much your words mean to me and how much inspiration comes from your comments. You say you look up to me, well I look up to YOU.

Every compliment you give me, just leaves me in awe, beacause I can never see how someone as talented and outstanding in their own writing can look to me or even see half the things you say you do in mine.It's so amazing...

I'm so glad I have you to look over my stories, you're like my adviser and confidante. I just feel so much more relieved when you love a story of mine, and it makes a difference in you. Wether it moves you or makes you laugh and makes the day better or what. All I can do is just try, and I'm just so happy that you love it. ^ ^ I will update asap.

I'm just gonna admit it, you could get every drop of info on this story outta me if you wished. lol
Between my eagerness to talk over ideas with you, (you see I already spoiled a lil bit earlier to you about the family)and your cute Imouto powers...yeah I'm helpless. Thank goodness I have Nee-chan powers as well. =P

I love you and I adore you even more for reading and loving this. XD I'll proabably start off the other Jaeho before I update this, so if I hit a writers block by chance I'll have something else to work on. Then theres always my FF.net stories. ^ ^ Love you Imouto!

[[ And uh...no you dont(you fiend you read my profile! XD)know my name. You do NOT. XDDD so NYAH Have a list? Yeah, know it? No. Hahahhaaha, I'll just ask your Ate Em-Em]]

Love Always,
Nee-chan,
-Mai-