Wow... what do I even say when I post the final chapter of the novel I've been working on for six years? Do I look back on all of my experiences writing it and the most important events that inspired parts of the story? I'd like to, but for tonight I need to give this to you and move on to the homework I neglected during this fit of passion. I had
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That was amazing.
I... Am finding myself at a loss for words.
Time to digest, be back tomorrow with constructive criticism.
Bravo!
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You've read it 5 times? No wayyy~! What a dedicated reader I have in you. Ugh, I'm glad someone thinks it wrapped up well. I still am conflicted over what kind of job I did for "Erik". Lily's story is wrapped up, but "Erik"'s...? Thanks, though.
Let me go down the line in response to the CC:
That scene you mentioned is Lily and Mariam talking in her car. I should have made that clearer, and I totally knew I was putting in similar imagery, I just went for it anyway because I was attached to the imagery.
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"As of recent" and "until recent" I believe are grammatically correct phrases. In cases where something happened, describing it as recent would require the word "recently" since it is an adverb, but as a word describing the recent past, a noun, I think "recent" covers it.
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I'm sorry - I thought it was clear since the paragraph about her playing Michael Crawford OST tapes was just a couple ones before that. Also, LJ took off my italics for the song lyrics Lily repeats in her head after that sentence. Close ( ... )
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