A Million Ways To Fall - Pt. XI
Brendon had been tossing and turning for what felt like hours trying to get comfortable. On top of the increase in Things to Worry About, his body was aching and the baby was restless. Theresa and Dr. Pierson assured him this was normal, but as much of a relief as that was, it still sucked.
He eventually gave up trying to sleep ( Read more... )
He eventually gave up trying to sleep ( Read more... )
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This story was so beautiful.
I wouldn't normally read things with mpreg, but I was intrigued and I'm so glad that I read it.
Brendon having a little baby is so cute.
And, he named him Freddie.
aww
And, oh my gosh, when Ryan admitted that he wished that it was him, my poor little heart.
You did such a fabulous job with this and I loved it.
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I am pretty much incoherent with glee at how utterly amazing this was.
You've written possibly my favourite Brendon ever. Ever. I thought his sexuality crisis was written wonderfully, it always felt real. He felt real. He was still the spazzy clingy Brendon we all know and love, but he was something more as well. My heart was breaking for Brendon up until he found out what was wrong (actually it was doing that for a lot of this fic but for different reasons) because we the readers knew what was the matter with him (well, I assumed the mpreg was him and obviously it was). I cried, like literally cried, when Brendon was told he was pregnant ( ... )
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I'm really, really happy that you enjoyed this so much. I had such a fantastic time writing it and living with these guys and girls in my head for months was a true joy. That you love Brendon here so much makes me happy because I was both worried and excited about writing him this way. The scene with Jon yelling at Brendon about wearing condoms was one of my favorites, as was the scene where Ryan confesses his feelings, so I'm glad you liked those so much.
I'm over the moon that you enjoyed the girlfriends (who were wicked fun to write) and that the ending worked for you. I was a little worried about that, too (and who knows, I may end up drabbling or even ficcing in this world again someday!).
Thank you so, so much for such an amazing response to my fic. ♥
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I love this. Lots. Words are failing me, at the moment, but I love that there's plot beyond mpreg, and I love your Brendon here, and it's just *awesome*.
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!! Thanks for reading, bb. :D
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I started crying 5 separate times, which I'm pretty sure is a record. And I've probably gone through every emotion under the sun with Bren here, I know some of what he's been through in this and it's amazing exactly how well you've captured it in writing.
Quite probably my favourite Brendon ever here. He was still his cute, clingy ADHD self, but with the growing up and realisation that parenthood will bring.
And definitely a wonderful characterisation on Shane too, one thing I said to kaytvengeance on MSN during reading was that I forget a lot of the time that Shane's older than them and it was nice of you to write that in. They were very natural together and although I wanted to hate him for being so careless with the tapes I just couldn't ( ... )
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Thank you so, so much. I'm really excited that so many people love Brendon here. He was a joy to write and I was hoping his characterization would be solid and work out well. And Shane was tough, too, because when I started this I had almost no idea what he was like. I'm really glad their relationship worked for you and that you didn't hate him!
Ryan broke my heart so many times while writing this and writing Haley and Keltie was so much fun (they are my favorites and I adore them both to pieces).
I really can't thank you enough for this amazing feedback. Thank you for reading. ♥
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