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l_toxicated

Stray Cardboard Boxes (5/?)

Sep 15, 2010 12:05

Title: Stray Cardboard Boxes (5/?)
Rating: PG-13

Genre: Romance/Comedy
Pairings: KyuHan. ShiHan.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Based on the manga, “Tramps Like Us.” It was one night of clumsiness that cost Geng a scuffed shoe and an accidental meeting with a runaway Kyuhyun. Generous and rather stupid, he takes the unconscious male in to tend to his ( Read more... )

kyuhan, shihan

Comments 61

l_toxicated September 15 2010, 19:06:14 UTC

Spot for whineey!

whineey September 15 2010, 20:08:50 UTC

OMG XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD as if Min's stalker team got caught outside Geng's flat by Han mama :'D and when she caught Siwon feeling up Geng xD oh dear
I'm so glad Siwon asked Geng out!

I love the KyuMi interaction too<3 Kyu needs to cheer up though :(
Ahhhhhh, I'm excited for the next chappttterrrr!!<3

l_toxicated September 15 2010, 20:40:58 UTC

I feel bad for poor Kyu though. : [ Geng and Siwon are 'together'.

: ) Yay!!

Thank you for the comment. <3

followurdestiny September 15 2010, 19:29:10 UTC

Spot for me xDD

followurdestiny September 15 2010, 19:50:45 UTC

ahww KyuHan XDD.. but there's SiHan now too 'officially' ... Geng still sees Kyu as a pet, but other people will not see it that way ... I wonder who those pair of eyes belong to XD... Geng is so naïve, but sweet <33. He has lots of admirers... XD
And Han Mama >_< hihi Siwon's looks are always a hit ...
Looking forward to more and Henry appearing! :D

l_toxicated September 15 2010, 20:35:48 UTC

XD Haha. I'm hoping for things to happen in the next chapter. Or at least, in my opinion. : ) Geng is naive and sweet! That's why he has a lot of admirers! Thank you for commenting.~

hit0rigurashi September 15 2010, 19:37:25 UTC

i liked it! really =)
it's really entertaining to read more on snarky/bratty! kyu...
and i love how geng always gives in to kyu's whims...
i love how geng has a soft spot for kyu <3

thanks for the update...
will wait for the next chappie =)

l_toxicated September 15 2010, 20:33:19 UTC

: ) Everyone has a soft spot for Snark brat Kyu!

Thank you for commenting!

rayneweather September 15 2010, 21:25:50 UTC

The quartet has *no* shame. Ok, Ryeowook has a little but the other 3 don't. They just marched right on in with Han Mama, They are some of the most oblivious people; seriously, 4 guys sitting outside a room trying to listen through the door with plastic cups screams SUSPICIOUS!!!! They're lucky Han Mama didn't call the police on them. Why do I get the feeling that the little sofa scene was a set up or completely innocent, i.e. something else was going on that just looked really bad when everyone walked in ( ... )

l_toxicated September 15 2010, 23:54:03 UTC

Han Mama just thought it was the typical Korean custom. LOL. -Shot- I wanted to add in some obvious scenes like the one with Sihan. It's a great conversation starter! Look how it ended with Geng and his mother. =D Fabulous. Haha.

I love portraying Kyuhyun as an out of shape nerd.

Yep! The beginning to their relationship will be the start of some conflict. Hopefully.~

Now the question is, why does Kibum have all the answers!? O_O It wouldn't be Donghae if he didn't mention his aliens at least once!

Yes. I wanted to establish that argument out because it's most likely going to occur again at some point when Geng develops his relationship further with Siwon. : D Yes! Kyu is more than just snark and ass. I'm sorry, but it's not Henry. XD

: D Okay! Thank you for the lovely comment!

anonymous September 15 2010, 21:39:46 UTC

8DDDD the fake bush and the binoculars almost had me in tears!! Ahhh I love this story so much, sorry I never comment! :P Please update soon! :D

l_toxicated September 15 2010, 23:47:10 UTC

: D You left a comment just now! Thank you for commenting.~~