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kriadydragon

SGA Fic - No such Thing as a Lone Wolf

Dec 21, 2010 23:49

Title: No Such Thing as a Lone Wolf
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Ronon, Sheppard, Rodney, Teyla, some OCs
Warnings: Violence, language, spider-like creatures
Summary: Wrongfully imprisoned, team Sheppard is forced to rely on a gang of convicts to escape a hostile planet, and Sheppard is hiding something. Ronon POV. Beta'd by the lovely linziday . Written for obsessed1o1 ( Read more... )

stargate atlantis, fanfiction

Comments 45

kristen999 December 26 2010, 23:54:23 UTC

Wow, this was a very intense ride and with a nice bit of world building. Haver was an ass, but he was actually kind of funny and was more than a two-dimensional foil for our team. Lovey Ronon and John interactions and a clever, plausible reason for John to hide his injury which was unique to boot. You juggled action, rock-spiders and firefights with ease, and it was a quite the fun ride.

Nicely done

kriadydragon December 28 2010, 22:09:51 UTC

Thank you :D It was incredibly fun to write. It's been a while since I wrote a good old fashioned team adventure ;)

titan5 December 27 2010, 00:42:07 UTC

That was great! Loved Sheppard being tough and carrying on while injured to get his people free. Haver and the gang thing was very realistic and to be expected in that setting. Loved Ronon remembering Gelyle and realizing that he was wrong. LOVED that ending statement!! It was perfect. And generally loved John's team trying to watch out for him and get him safely back to Atlantis.

kriadydragon December 28 2010, 22:11:39 UTC

Thanks! :D

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kriadydragon December 28 2010, 22:12:35 UTC

Thank you :D I really like Sheppard and Ronon friendship stuff. Ronon does get Sheppard, and for me it makes their friendship the easiest to write.

ratcreature December 27 2010, 17:27:36 UTC

I enjoyed this and how it showed Ronon's and Sheppard's friendship.

kriadydragon December 28 2010, 22:12:51 UTC

Thanks :D

coolbreeze1 December 28 2010, 04:57:56 UTC

Great job! Loved the whump in this one and its slow, detrimental effect on Sheppard. The threat of being killed because he might slow the group down was a great idea and very believable reason for Sheppard to want to keep that hidden. I love that Ronon spots what's going on - such a great comment on their relationship. Excellent!

kriadydragon December 28 2010, 22:13:39 UTC

Thank you :D I always seem to start a story off with Sheppard whumped, poor boy, but it makes things so much more interesting ;)