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kriadydragon

SGA Fic - No such Thing as a Lone Wolf

Dec 21, 2010 23:49

Title: No Such Thing as a Lone Wolf
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Ronon, Sheppard, Rodney, Teyla, some OCs
Warnings: Violence, language, spider-like creatures
Summary: Wrongfully imprisoned, team Sheppard is forced to rely on a gang of convicts to escape a hostile planet, and Sheppard is hiding something. Ronon POV. Beta'd by the lovely linziday . Written for obsessed1o1 ( Read more... )

stargate atlantis, fanfiction

Comments 45

jlnyr December 23 2010, 00:16:09 UTC

Really liked this story. Thanks for it.

kriadydragon December 23 2010, 22:42:23 UTC

Thanks for reading :D

obsessed1o1 December 23 2010, 02:11:23 UTC

Oh this is exactly what i was looking for. I love it that Sheppard was trying to act in the best interests of his team and i love that you managed to get in there the bond between John and Ronon. This was an interesting piece and the OC characters were nicely fleshed out too.

John's injuries were horrific. Can't believe he managed to stay so stoic at the beginning! But i love that he did :-) Wonderfully written and executed as always!

kriadydragon December 23 2010, 22:44:16 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it :D I really enjoyed writing it - I do love John and Ronon friendship.

saphirablue December 24 2010, 15:02:43 UTC

Wonderful story! :)

Thank you! :)

kriadydragon December 26 2010, 05:54:46 UTC

Glad you enjoyed :D

skeddy_kat December 25 2010, 23:53:04 UTC

You captured both Ronon and John beautifully. Nicely done.

kriadydragon December 26 2010, 05:55:03 UTC

Thanks! :D

dernhelm62 December 26 2010, 05:10:03 UTC

John and Ronon friendship, nicely done. It seems to me that Sheppard would always try to do what is right for the circumstances and hiding his injuries were totally appropriate for this sceneario. This story had a lot of thought and culture development put into it. I appreciate that a lot. Thanks :)

kriadydragon December 26 2010, 05:59:29 UTC

Thank you :D Trying to figure out a way for Sheppard to hide his injuries for the good of the team was pretty tricky. I had wanted something that was more absolute and Sheppard's situation felt a bit more gray - tell his team so they know what to expect, don't tell them to keep Haver from catching on. But I liked how it turned out, because real rocks and hard places are never so black and white. Most of the time we only have our gut to rely on, and if John's gut told him to keep quiet, then it was for a good reason ;)