[Fic] as luck would have it 9/? (wip)

[kratynoi]

Title: as luck would have it 9/?
Pairing: Jaejoong/Changmin AU; JaeMin (other pairings: YunYoon, YooSu)
Length: Chaptered/ WIP
Rating: PG-13ish? I don't know how to rate. We'll say there's a little bit of language and suggestive content (but seriously, very very innocent)
A/N: So finally, the first date!! I hope it meets expectations. XD

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Comments

[waterpulse]

OKAY I LOOKED BUT THERE IS NO GIF THAT CAN PROPERLY EXPRESS MY SIMULTANEOUS FLAILING/MELTING/DELIGHT SO HERE HAVE A ;ALSDKFJA;LSDKFJOAIWERUPAOIFJLCVX.,AKSJEF;LASKJF;AOISUJDF ;____;

I love your imagery and the way you describe Jaejoong's feelings around the Han River part that continues throughout the rest of the fic, it's just lovely. Also I love the slow-building of their relationship and how Jaejoong's apprehension comes out in your writing and a;sldkfj;alskdjf yoosuu~~ ♥

[kratynoi]

TO BE ABLE TO GET YOU TO KEYSMASH AND FLAIL AT SOMETHING I WRITE IS HIGH HIGH PRAISE~~~~ ;A;

^///^ I fluff and no embellishments would be a waste of writing space. I'm glad Jaejoong's feelings come through so well.

YooSu gets their time to shine too~~ although it's mainly through text and off handed comments. XD

*glomps* Thank you my love~~~ I'm so glad you enjoyed it. ^^

[ashleyjanee]

Oh I love this chapter, they're so cute together! I can't wait to see their first kiss!!!

[kratynoi]

^^ They're sickeningly sweet aren't they? XD

Thank you dear~~~!!! (oh first kiss~ :x)

[dreaming_col]

..... Aaaaaand now I want cake. Thanks for that. XP

(Oh, and they're adorable. The end. ^_^)

[kratynoi]

LMAO XDDDD Lovely comment, m'dear. So insightful and full of great commentary and critique.

[dreaming_col]

Isn't it though? I'm good at those. *nods*

[jaeminism]

UNNIEEEEEEEE... CAN I KISS YOU??? htdfhgjklhkgdfgjk

The update is longer than usual... U made me happyyyyyy...

AND THE DATEEEEE... OMGEEEEEEEEEE!!!

And they are official nowwwwwwwww... gfhjkljhgfdghjk... (breath Tani breathhh)

I love both JaeMin's character is this fic. There soo fluffy and cuddly and and... I DON'T KNOW ANYMORE. I just loveeeeeeeeee themmmm...

When will they confess???

OH MY GOD...!!! I don't know how long will it take me to get over with this chapter...

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[kratynoi]

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Hahaha~~ they didn't want to end their date!!! I wanted to end it like, halfway through but they're like, nope~ longer longer! So there you go~

Lol~ don't die on me Tani! I haven't even gotten to their first kiss or confessed or anything! ^^ I'm glad you like their characterizations. I don't want it too far from how they may be.

:D Well~ enjoy this chapter as much as you'd like~~

[jaeminism]

Did u just say KISS? 1st Kiss??? semhfashkl;d'skdajghfhjdg.. I was waiting for their confession but now that you have mentioned abt their kiss... UNNIEEEEEEEE... THEY BETTER KISS SOON... AND IT BETTER BE FLUFFY... AND AND... I DON'T KNOW. JUST MAKE THEM KISS ALREADYYYYYY...jshgbfhkjdghfd