[Fic] as luck would have it 4/? (wip)

[kratynoi]

Title: as luck would have it 4/?
Pairing: Jaejoong/Changmin AU; JaeMin (with a few minor pairings sprinkled throughout)
Length: Chaptered/ WIP
Rating: PG
A/N: I finished this up last night at like...2AM XD I tried to go in and edit so hopefully it flows okay.

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Comments

[ashleyjanee]

I really really like this story, I can't wait until Jamin's relationship progresses. It kinda seems like both Changmin and Junsu have a bit of a thing for Jaejoong and were having some sort of competition to get his attention that night or at least that's what I thought, haha. Changmin should have stayed with him for the night, it would have been cute~

[kratynoi]

Hahaha~ on Junsu's side, it's more of brotherly affection. (and the fact that JaeSu has been invading my thoughts more often than not) For Jaejoong, if he didn't have Changmin, he probably would have gone for Junsu. :3 But hey~ Junsu may have gotten a little more than brotherly affection for Jae, never know. ;3

Lol~ I wanted Changmin to stay too but he was having none of it. ^^;

^_______________^ Thank you~!!

[waterpulse]

[kratynoi]

IT WILL GET FLUFFEH AGAIN DO NOT WORRY! THIS WHOLE THING IS A PIECE OF FLUFF ON STEROIDS.

[waterpulse]

YOU PLOMISE?!?!

[kratynoi]

I SHALL TRY MY BEST BUT I CANNOT PROMISE B/C THESE BBs LIKE TO JUST BRING ON THE ANGST. as you so well know TT
(i'd like to say I write my characters but they often write themselves w/o me trying)

[dreaming_col]

Ugh, Min's so awkwardly stupid. -_- I'm still trying to decide whether he's oblivious as well or not... And JaeJae's so cute~~~!!! I wanna smoosh him. Someday... XD

(There were a couple instances where your voice changed from second to first person. Just something to look out for if you edit again. ^^)

[kratynoi]

Hahaha XD I'm glad you're liking Jae at least. XD Min...we'll see. ( when we're all BFFs, yes?)

And thank you for catching those. I thought I got them all. I will go back in and edit later~~~~ *snuggles*

[dreaming_col]

(Exactly~~~! That elusive day... XD

No problem, dear. 'Tis what I'm here for. ^^

[kratynoi]

Just read through, stupid formatting. XD They were supposed to be italicized to indicate it was Jaejoong's thoughts. But it's fixed now. ^^ Thank you dear~

[whatifgirl86]

Never have read a Yunho/Yoona fic (I think)so that was interesting, seems like they're a good pairing:)

I thought Changmin would've taken the opportunity to spend the night, even if he slept on the couch, but he just had to leave.

Liked this update:D

[kratynoi]

^^ It's one of my good friends who turned me onto YunYoon. I never would have thought it normally. I hope I at least got her essence okay. I don't know the SNSD girls that well. I'm glad they at least seem like a plausible couple.

Lol, what can I say, Changmin's an awkward little boy behind that masculine facade.

Thank you dear!!!!

[waterpulse]

HEH.

[kratynoi]

LMAO XDDD ARE YOU JUST STALKING MY COMMENTS!? XDDDDD

YESSS BASK IN THE GLORY OF WHAT YOU'VE CREATED. BUILT A SHIP FROM YOUR OWN TWO HANDS.

[jaeminism]

ok I am kinda confused... why was Min so upset at the restaurant? Bcz Chunnie was kidding? As u know I am dumb so pls explain the situation to me... and MIN IS MOODY... and meann to jae... my poor jae baby...

[kratynoi]

Hahaha~ yeah sorry, I know that part was kind of poorly written.

Basically Min was upset because when Chun said it was a date, he specifically looked over to Jae and was leering at him and everything. (basically Chun was trying to greasily suggest to his roommate that he was on a date with Su and Jae was with Min and yeah, it got kind of mixed up in there. Either way! Changmin misinterprets Yoochun's wink as him hitting on Jaejoong and he gets all upset and moody....'cause he's such a moody kid)

Don't worry~~ I make up for it in the next one...I hope. XD

[jaeminism]

AISHHH... I hate his mood swings...-___-

[kratynoi]

He has them in real life too!!