off to the races (3/?)

[douc]

off to the races (3/?)
~ 4107 w, r, (krystal/kai) l part i. part ii.
Tao chimes in with his mouth full of salt and vinegar chips, “Sleeping with the enemy is hot.”

■ that took long /whew
■ fanmix/soundtrack■ um wait what sexual tension between krystal and more boys? whut?! (no I won't tell you where this is heading

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[douc]

spot for kurdoodle

[kurdoodle]

wow this is so good! for some reason i REALLY loved sehun in here. like wow the lengths he is willing to go and i just love his confidence that he'll win like WOW THAT IS SO ATTRACTIVE??? D: although krystal with the M boys is quite intriguing lol. for some reason i always thought that M boys were more badass, idk if that makes sense. anyways, that kaistal scene at the end though!!!1 this is some very interesting progress for our otp... hmm

good job yuri! as usual ;) hehe

[kurdoodle]

basically the sekai was so good because BEST EXO OTP EVER and i just really like their friendship. and as aqsa mentioned, KRYSTAL'S VULNERABILITY like she's so strong and tough all the time and she's such a rebel and yet she has that soft spot for kai and that's just so cute although also sad cuz it's gonna lead to a lot of complications.

it’s something completely different, almost threatening, almost like he had achieved something…deceitful -

The pain is instantaneous, shoots right to her head and shuts down her every defence against him. Table’s been turned- he’s hovering her, easing her into the mattress and sleep comes for her so quick she knows she won’t recollect any of it.

“I'm surprised," comes on the edge of a hazy dream, "For once, you're not trying to kiss me."FAVE PART OKAY because no wonder the exo-k boys didn't feel threatened by her? like she went upstairs and they just stayed where they were. awhh kai so deceitful "almost threatening" "like he had achieved something" WOW how do you word this?? tables turned indeed!

[douc]

I've got things planned for sehun, what I personally think is a good story line for his character but then we'll see! Either way I'm glad you're liking his character.

Krystal has a soft spot....for a reason /dun dun dun
IT WILL BE PAINFUL TO WRITE, I SWEAR

[douc]

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[onceuponataem]

SCREAMINGSIODF JAOFJADSgadsoGASGOEHwagV SHDHOASI NOT READY

[onceuponataem]

UMMMMM OMG I REREAD PART ONE AND TWO JUST TO RMB ALL THE DETAILS AND OMG OMGOMGOGMGOGMOGMgGOGMGOGMgogmgogmogGOMGOM WHAT WHAT WHAT first off i love this whole ot6 vs. ot6 thing going on UNF yes pls need more (luhan is so cute tho omg he was so shy and omg he should just run off and find sanctuary with exo-k bc they would be nicer lmao), and then all the cute bickering and HMMMMMMMMMMMM lay and krystal shady shady and OMG THERE WAS THIS LINE ONE SEC

Tao chimes in with his mouth full of salt and vinegar chips, “Sleeping with the enemy is hot.”FUCKING FUCKSJDFSOA THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST LINES IVE READ IN SO LONG. I JUST. ITS MY MOTTO NOW. MY LIFE'S ANTHEM. LIKE. OMG. I DONT EVEN LIKE SALT AND VINEGAR CHIPS (i'm a sour cream and onion gal) BUT JUST YES OMG SLEEPING WITH THE ENEMY AKA JONGIN OMG THAT IS SO HOT LUSTFUL SEX IS THE BEST CAN I DIE BC IM JUST GONNA POST THIS LINE EVERYWHERE BYE

[douc]

I just had to make Luhan cute, I couldn't not make him cute ugh and I think you're right, exo k probs would be much nicer haha

EVERYONE SEEMS TO LIKE THAT LINE AND IDK WHY?! BUT I'M HAPPY CAUSE IT'S GETTING QUOTED SFM IN THE COMMENT SECTION

they DID trick her so you did guess right. tbh even writing this myself, idk who I feel sorry for cause both sides take turns in screwing each other up to get to their goals.

no, Krystal is not Kris's girlfriend, I can tell you that right now and that storyline won't be happening ever in the fic.

LOL NAOMI YOU ARE NOT INNOCENT

[douc]

spot for bollywoodrecord

[bollywoodrecord]

Tao chimes in with his mouth full of salt and vinegar chips, “Sleeping with the enemy is hot.”

yeSSSSSSSS

[douc]

I CAN'T WAIT UNTL WE GET TO THE SEXY TIMES OMG

[bollywoodrecord]

HOW COME YOUR WRITING IS SO HOT OMG I DONT THINK IM PREPARED FOR SEXY TIMES

crying krystal in m is so beautiful they're all so stupid and weirdly infatuated with her i love it minseok especially “The ass wipe you smooch back there is no stud, my gene is superior in every way,” crying lemme love you

[douc]

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[jumons]

SPOT! AHDJAGAHAHSJKL!!11 i'll come back to read later. :3

[douc]

I hope you'll enjoy this chapter ;)

[jumons]

ONG YAAASSS THIS CHAPTER WAS EVERYTHING AND MORE!! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING YURI!! ♥ OMG MY THOUGHTS ARE ALL OVER THE PLACE, THIS COMMENT PROBABLY WON'T MAKE SENSE ;;

CAN I JUST START OFF BY SAYING THAT LINE THAT TAO HAS (yes, the line that everyone has commented on) WAS THE BEST LINE EVER!!

anyways, it surprised me how krystal is going soft, very slightly, but i still noticed it. she's a little more human and less bitch now lol. i also love the sehun/krystal interactions, his confidence during the race was just plain //sexy// and his attitude towards soojung makes me chuckle. i think sehun is my favorite!!!

i'm so excited to read more and see what you have in store for the plot. I CANNOT WAIT!!

[douc]

EVERYONE LIKES THAT LINE EXCEPT ME, I SWEAR

please keep in mind though that each chapters are from different POV so different POV have different views on each characters so you'll never know if Krystal is fully bitchy or not until we get quite far into the fic lol