off to the races (3/?)

Jan 04, 2014 12:27

off to the races (3/?)
~ 4107 w, r, (krystal/kai) l part i. part ii.
Tao chimes in with his mouth full of salt and vinegar chips, “Sleeping with the enemy is hot.”

■ that took long /whew
fanmix/soundtrack■ um wait what sexual tension between krystal and more boys? whut?! (no I won't tell you where this is heading ( Read more... )

!fanmix, fandom: exo-m, fic: off to the races, ♥ : krystal/kai, fandom: f(x), Ξ : douc, fandom: exo-k, *full length

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onceuponataem January 4 2014, 02:41:20 UTC
UMMMMM OMG I REREAD PART ONE AND TWO JUST TO RMB ALL THE DETAILS AND OMG OMGOMGOGMGOGMOGMgGOGMGOGMgogmgogmogGOMGOM WHAT WHAT WHAT first off i love this whole ot6 vs. ot6 thing going on UNF yes pls need more (luhan is so cute tho omg he was so shy and omg he should just run off and find sanctuary with exo-k bc they would be nicer lmao), and then all the cute bickering and HMMMMMMMMMMMM lay and krystal shady shady and OMG THERE WAS THIS LINE ONE SEC

Tao chimes in with his mouth full of salt and vinegar chips, “Sleeping with the enemy is hot.”

FUCKING FUCKSJDFSOA THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST LINES IVE READ IN SO LONG. I JUST. ITS MY MOTTO NOW. MY LIFE'S ANTHEM. LIKE. OMG. I DONT EVEN LIKE SALT AND VINEGAR CHIPS (i'm a sour cream and onion gal) BUT JUST YES OMG SLEEPING WITH THE ENEMY AKA JONGIN OMG THAT IS SO HOT LUSTFUL SEX IS THE BEST CAN I DIE BC IM JUST GONNA POST THIS LINE EVERYWHERE BYE

but no aside from that, krystal is so rebellious like she's not into the rules which is cool bc she doesn't want to stick to one place and she's not scared of the consequences if she doesn't completely obey, and omg tbh when sehun showed up to race her for that poison thing i was like this is so shady but he played with her emotions ;-; I SAW THAT LITTLE BREAK IN HER STEEL ARMOR she cares about kai too and so she raced him and went to find the drug for him and brought it back with him and omg T_________________________________T i can't believe the end BC TBH I WAS EXPECTING THIS (they tricked her right??? or did i interpret that last bit wrong), but either way omg idk if i should feel bad for her bc for once she cared a little like she genuinely wanted to see him and then they took advantage of her feelings, or maybe i shouldn't feel so horrible bc she was a bitch before too playing with kai and the others, kaistal is just so sad FOR THEM RN also this:

Krystal almost laughs when she discovers that, what’s been up her ass might just save it.

hahahhaha u had me thinkin it was smth else, u sneaky little thing. but of course. it's not. what i thought. it was. but. like. i wasn't thinking. anything bad. or anything. ~i'm innocent~ huhuhu tho omg you write so well such good descriptions and i love like legit how every closing line to each part is so nice and witty like ah yeh this is good fiction right here. hmm also i had a question but wait lemme think............................. oh yes (this is me coming back like fifteen minutes later actually XD) is krystal kris's girlfriend?? idk i think it was mentioned in the first part but no interactions with them upto now so.............. idk lol gonna finish this crazy sexual rant with one last quote:

“Hey, sugar, you wanna come over here so I can take you for a ride?”

“Sure, baby, I’d love that.”

LMAO I JUST REALLY LOVED THAT ok bye i wasn't thinking of anything bad again. yes.

ALSO KAI IS REALLY HOT just wanted to say this. if he was my enemy i'd try to get captured anyday.

i'll stop now

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douc January 31 2014, 06:16:53 UTC
I just had to make Luhan cute, I couldn't not make him cute ugh and I think you're right, exo k probs would be much nicer haha

EVERYONE SEEMS TO LIKE THAT LINE AND IDK WHY?! BUT I'M HAPPY CAUSE IT'S GETTING QUOTED SFM IN THE COMMENT SECTION

they DID trick her so you did guess right. tbh even writing this myself, idk who I feel sorry for cause both sides take turns in screwing each other up to get to their goals.

no, Krystal is not Kris's girlfriend, I can tell you that right now and that storyline won't be happening ever in the fic.

LOL NAOMI YOU ARE NOT INNOCENT

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