when the door closes . 01
pg-13 (jooyeon/g.o, soyeon/seungho)
they've only betrayed each other as much as they've let their hearts betray them.
a/n: one of my first chaptered fics that i'm actually going to work hard on. feedback and ideas would be much appreciated!
- inspired by this
- previous chapters: 00
- jooyeon isn't a complete bitch, not yet. i'm
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seungho/soyeon/GO/jooyeon love square??!?!?! this may just become my ultimate OTP in an OTP :D
Love your style of writing and the ANGST and basically everything!!
oh and how the different periods in time are pieced together, it workds really well ^^
keep it up bb!!! <3 looking forward to the next chap! (btw people hardly ever do chaptered so I love you more for writing this^^)
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i don't even know how i am going to work this all out. it hurts me to see that i am hurting the spiritual twins. but both couples are two of my otps.
thank you so much, i really appreciate it! ♥
chaptered fics are so hard >__
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seeing the spiritual twins caught up in this whirilwind hurts me too but I love this fic too much so it's okay :)
Especially as Seungho is my absolute FAVOURITE and just about ideal guy - I LOVE his personality/piano playing/laid-backness/bossyness etcetc <3
Can't wait for next chap, really appreciate you taking the time and hard work over this! Xxxxxxxxxxxxx
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anyways, thank you~ it's hard for me to write chaptered, so i'm trying hard hahaha.
I LOVE THE SPIRITUAL TWINS, what am i doing to them. seungho is my future husband .. as for all the other girls who want to marry him. sigh.
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'it didn't mean anything,' he makes the point clear because he knows it didn't. for either of them.
(and they wonder why they can't say that about byunghee and soyeon - they wonder why they can't just say it didn't mean anything for them, but the whole point was that it did.)
Agh... I mean, I really love Jooyeon and all, but I feel so bad for G.O. God... This is getting really intense.
AAAAND, I loved how you updated so fast. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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any ideas?
and thank you ♥
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The capturing of the sadness in them all was lovely~
I also adore the whole bittersweet love square or whatever they've created =)
I can't wait until you update!
I wish that next time I can write a longer comment 8D
Much Love Hun~<3333333
Take Care! x3
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it's definitely one bittersweet mess. mostly bitter.
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i loved this chapterr, though it makes me sad how broken g.o. is,
it makes me wanna cryy ;; :(
jooyeon and seungho kissed, let me tell you, did NOT see that comingg, wow, i was legit surprisedd ;;
i cant wait for the next chapterrr ;;! !
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and thank you so much ♥ don't cryyyy. there's much more drama to ensue.
and yeah .. i didn't really see jooyeon/seungho happening either, but i just kind of happened xD
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update soon!!
do you mind to add me on your pm list if you have one?
that would be awesome!
thx^^
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♥ thank you!
and sure! np.
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