when the door closes

[withoutchange]

when the door closes . 01
pg-13 (jooyeon/g.o, soyeon/seungho) 
they've only betrayed each other as much as they've let their hearts betray them.
a/n: one of my first chaptered fics that i'm actually going to work hard on. feedback and ideas would be much appreciated!

• inspired by this
• previous chapters: 00
• jooyeon isn't a complete bitch, not yet. i'm

Comments

[cookiecakedream]

um, I think I love you

seungho/soyeon/GO/jooyeon love square??!?!?! this may just become my ultimate OTP in an OTP :D

Love your style of writing and the ANGST and basically everything!!
oh and how the different periods in time are pieced together, it workds really well ^^

keep it up bb!!! <3 looking forward to the next chap! (btw people hardly ever do chaptered so I love you more for writing this^^)

[withoutchange]

i think i love you!

i don't even know how i am going to work this all out. it hurts me to see that i am hurting the spiritual twins. but both couples are two of my otps.

thank you so much, i really appreciate it! ♥
chaptered fics are so hard >__

[cookiecakedream]

Thanks So much for commenting on my crappy fic that I wrote like a year ago bb ^^ even though yours is a million imps better/sweeter/angstier/generally spazzworthy <3

seeing the spiritual twins caught up in this whirilwind hurts me too but I love this fic too much so it's okay :)
Especially as Seungho is my absolute FAVOURITE and just about ideal guy - I LOVE his personality/piano playing/laid-backness/bossyness etcetc <3

Can't wait for next chap, really appreciate you taking the time and hard work over this! Xxxxxxxxxxxxx

[withoutchange]

crappy?! lol i MEMMED it. i liked it that much ♥

anyways, thank you~ it's hard for me to write chaptered, so i'm trying hard hahaha.

I LOVE THE SPIRITUAL TWINS, what am i doing to them. seungho is my future husband .. as for all the other girls who want to marry him. sigh.

[bollywoodrecord]

She kissed him? She freaking kissed him?!

'it didn't mean anything,' he makes the point clear because he knows it didn't. for either of them.

(and they wonder why they can't say that about byunghee and soyeon - they wonder why they can't just say it didn't mean anything for them, but the whole point was that it did.)

Agh... I mean, I really love Jooyeon and all, but I feel so bad for G.O. God... This is getting really intense.

AAAAND, I loved how you updated so fast. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!!

[withoutchange]

she did kiss him D: i don't know, i thougt it seemed appropriate - i hope i don't turn jooyeon into some crazy bitch. (doesn't even know what direction this fic is going.)

any ideas?
and thank you ♥

[elvenknight16]

I loved this sweetie ^_^
The capturing of the sadness in them all was lovely~
I also adore the whole bittersweet love square or whatever they've created =)
I can't wait until you update!
I wish that next time I can write a longer comment 8D
Much Love Hun~<3333333
Take Care! x3

[withoutchange]

n____n thank youuu very much! i'm glad you enjoyed it ♥
it's definitely one bittersweet mess. mostly bitter.

[conversefreak16]

why are you such a good writer ?! like , fer reallll ,lol ;;
i loved this chapterr, though it makes me sad how broken g.o. is,
it makes me wanna cryy ;; :(

jooyeon and seungho kissed, let me tell you, did NOT see that comingg, wow, i was legit surprisedd ;;

i cant wait for the next chapterrr ;;! !

[withoutchange]

lolol. your icon is super cute.
and thank you so much ♥ don't cryyyy. there's much more drama to ensue.

and yeah .. i didn't really see jooyeon/seungho happening either, but i just kind of happened xD

Oh My i love this!

[reigndevouz]

i swear i shed tears reading this. and my itunes playing Rust while reading this doesnt help the tears to stop trickling T_T

update soon!!
do you mind to add me on your pm list if you have one?
that would be awesome!

thx^^

Re: Oh My i love this!

[withoutchange]

/hands tissue box.
♥ thank you!

and sure! np.