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kitokoi

Bitter/Sweet [Chapter eleven]

Jun 19, 2011 21:10

Bitter/Sweet
Chapter 11/?
Previous Chapters
Reita/Ruki
Rated PG-13
Takanori makes the mistake of hanging around his old school and Akira takes interest.
Takanori didn’t much like people. Not because he had anything against them personally, but because he knew that in the end, they wouldn’t like him. The few friends he did have while he was in school had ( Read more... )

reitaxruki, reituki, ruki, reita, bitter/sweet, fanfiction

Comments 31

ruucake June 20 2011, 01:19:10 UTC

i am a bigger fag for fluff then smut so i like it so much better when there's implied smut instead of heavily described smut. extra points for you awww yeeahhh.
this was like. the fluffiest fluff in the world omg. and as stated i love fluff with my life \o/ and when he was telling him to shut up ahhhh that pleased me idek.
MY HEART IS THROBBING
and i will get back to drawing
amazing as always \o/

kitokoi June 20 2011, 01:34:21 UTC

i don't like writing actual smut. i just can't go into detail about those things. besides, imagination is a powerful tool. so i leave it to the readers. XP

and yes, taka is demanding. cuz he's a little princess. and he gets what he wants. huhuhu.

glad you liked it. <33333333

[yes. keep drawing. go go go go!!!!]

blacmeissa June 20 2011, 01:33:47 UTC

Yuu is such a child -_-
I like how you did the smut scene without there being much smut xD.
The fluff part did things to my tummy lol.
Chapter was cute.

kitokoi June 20 2011, 01:35:21 UTC

yes. yuu is a child. that is how i see him and how i will forever see him and people are just going to have to deal with that. the love of my life is practically a 5 year old. XDDD

thank you bb. <333333

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kitokoi June 20 2011, 02:04:01 UTC

i take it that you liked it then? that's what i'm going with. XP

<333

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kitokoi June 20 2011, 05:40:46 UTC

LSKDJSLDFKJGDSLFKJ

YOU ARE TOO KIND FOR SRS!

but thank you bb. <333333

confusion_hime June 20 2011, 02:38:33 UTC

Gah! There was smut almost! I wish there really was, but not giving details on it was also okay. It made this chapter fluffier and I love how Yuu is all curious about how it was like, haha. I know this fic is focused on Reituki but I hope Yuu also have a partner. XDD

Anyway, this chappy is made of pure win, bb. I love it! :)

kitokoi June 20 2011, 05:40:07 UTC

Eh, I prefer not to make the smut so obvious. I leave most of it up to the reader's imagination. I find it much more classy that way. ;D

As for Yuu, I really don't know what he's doing. I don't really have a hold on the characters anymore. More and more they seem to be writing themselves. XP

thank you for reading. <3333