Bitter/Sweet [Chapter eleven]

Jun 19, 2011 21:10

Bitter/Sweet
Chapter 11/?
Previous Chapters
Reita/Ruki
Rated PG-13
Takanori makes the mistake of hanging around his old school and Akira takes interest.
Takanori didn’t much like people. Not because he had anything against them personally, but because he knew that in the end, they wouldn’t like him. The few friends he did have while he was in school had ( Read more... )

reitaxruki, reituki, ruki, reita, bitter/sweet, fanfiction

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happykawaiiday June 20 2011, 04:34:13 UTC
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHYOMFGOPMFYUUFFGVOMFGRUUUKIOMFGKAAAIIIIOMGGGGGGGG
Best chapter yet. not because of the undetailed smeck, but... it's just plain too cuute!! djkthivrhtuwdhtkih ecfgu jdhhfgf
*dies*
*awakens*
OMGG!! -showers you with delicious cookies-
I lol'ed so much when Takanori folded the shirt. XDDD like, who does that!? Hahhahahahahha
( probably you...) >____>
whut?
OMFGG Reita confessed. *O* *dies again*

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kitokoi June 20 2011, 05:38:48 UTC
Haha I'm so glad you liked it.

[no i do not personally do that, but i can see ruki doing that since he is such a neat freak]

<33333

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n3uromanc3r June 20 2011, 09:13:52 UTC
Awwww they are so lovely!

I liked the confession and how Takanori reacted.
And my favourite part was the end with the three of them at that café. It was so amusing seeing those two sitting tightly next to each other behaving so carefree and happy and the confused on the opposite side!


... )

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kitokoi June 21 2011, 09:48:48 UTC
ah i'm so glad you like it! thank you so much for reading! <33333

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neko_saaa_n June 20 2011, 09:44:19 UTC
I love the character you created as Yuu XDD LOL! he is soo fun LOL!
ahaha... and Takanori.. perv!! I love him! lol!
Akira finally confessed! pure love!<3
I love this fic so much....

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kitokoi June 21 2011, 09:48:12 UTC
haha i just write yuu as i see him. well, as i imagine how he would have been as a teenager anyway. ;D

thank you so much. i'm honored. m(_ _)m

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limaccia_san June 20 2011, 10:25:03 UTC
I aww out louder with each new chapter!
I agree with a comment up there, implied smut is way better sometimes and this was simply perfect. Loved it <3

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kitokoi June 21 2011, 09:47:25 UTC
ah that must mean the story is getting better then. XP

thank you so much! <3333

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sylvie_asv June 20 2011, 11:20:27 UTC
OMG best chapter ever~~~

KYYYAAAA~~

oke fangirl moment over.. KYYYAA~~~.. or not [blush]

anyho'... it was awesome.. but I suppose there is more nee~? [pokes pokes]
\(* . *)/

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kitokoi June 21 2011, 09:46:49 UTC
OMG not even. XP

thank you hon. and yes, of course there is more. <333

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