Little Deaths

[kiss_me_cait23]

Rating: NC17
Pairing: SasuNaru
Summary: Loving someone this broken is truly a thankless task, but Naruto isn't looking for thanks.
A/N: My profound apologies for the worst title in existence.

Comments

[aquarian_days]

This is lovely! It's sad and wistful, yet full of love, longing, and passion. Despite the fact that this Naruto would move heaven and earth for Sasuke, he doesn't come across as a doormat, which I love. Rather, he seems to have a very definite inner strength. They both really need each other here, although for different reasons--perhaps--but I do think Sasuke cares more for Naruto than Naruto realizes. (It's Naruto that he seems to need and not anyone else, after all.) Thanks for sharing. ^_^

[Also, you should totally post this to the sasuxnaru community since more people will see it there than sasunaru]:

http://community.livejournal.com/sasuxnaru/

[kiss_me_cait23]

That's...pretty much exactly what I was going for. I'm so glad it spoke to you like that, and thanks for commenting!

(I will totally check that community out. I'm relatively new to the fandom, so I still don't really know where to find all this stuff).

[cynaga]

Beautiful!

I especially liked:

"But this was Sasuke. Sasuke, whose biggest fear was his capacity for love. Sasuke, who went too far just to prove he could take it. Sasuke, who sometimes shook so hard in Naruto’s arms that he threatened to shatter into pieces. And while Naruto never truly craved penetration, feeling Sasuke so deep inside him always stole his breath."

[kiss_me_cait23]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

^u^

[doneitall]

This was slow, and angtsy. It was really nice, and, this is kind of hard to explain, but it's relateable.

Re: ^u^

[kiss_me_cait23]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.