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killing_kurare

3 Harry Potter Drabbles - misc pairs

Jan 29, 2015 11:06

Title: The clock strikes midnight
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Narcissa/Bellatrix
Wordcount: 177
Rating: PG-13
Warning: hinted abuse
Challenge: femslash100 - Drabbletag5: midnight

( The first stroke of the big clock sounds through the house and makes Narcissa shriek. )

fandom: harry potter, character: bellatrix lestrange, pair: narcissa/pansy, character: narcissa malfoy, character: petunia dursley, femslash, pair: lily/petunia, character: lily evans, pair: narcissa/bellatrix, drabbletag5, incest, character: pansy parkinson

Comments 10

fresh_brainss January 29 2015, 19:50:59 UTC

"Over thinking" is so cute, I love where you took the prompt. Narcissa on a broomstick is indeed a nice image.

killing_kurare January 29 2015, 21:12:18 UTC

Aaaand the last one :D
Again, I love you so much for taking the time to read AND comment my drabbles <3
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!

At first the image of graceful, elegant Narcissa on a broomstick was a little weird, but that turn of events was just fun to write and imagine :D

swan_secrets February 1 2015, 23:31:58 UTC

"The clock strikes midnight" - Is so intense and dark. You did a magnificent job building up the tension

"Over Thinking" Is a great contrast, light and airy, like flying should be. Lovely idea and imagery.

"Special chocolate" - This is kind of dark when you think about it, and adds more to the reasons why Petunia hates magic so much.

killing_kurare February 2 2015, 08:29:01 UTC

Thank you for leaving an opinion to each one :D

1. I really had fun doing this one to twelve thing ... originally I didn't plan to make it this dark and angsty, but in the end I liked it that way :'D

2. Thanks, that is what I was aiming for :3

3. Gosh you're right ... I never thought of 'the morning-after', Petunia's waking up, the reaction, the confrontation! I think I'm going to write a sequel sometime :o Thanks for that new POV :'D

irrlichtertanz February 5 2015, 17:03:39 UTC

Oh, a sequel to 'Special chocolate' would be so awesome :D

So, I really like all of the 3 Drabbles, but I think, I have to say, that I really love the 1st.

killing_kurare February 5 2015, 17:54:38 UTC

Yeah, maybe if I find a prompt to fill it xD But it is something that's really tempting me :D

Thank you :3 To be honest, my favourite one is also the first ;D Nothing beats Blackcest!

Thread 5

irrlichtertanz February 5 2015, 16:54:34 UTC

Hey Dear,

I have to say, that I really love 'The clock strikes midnight'.
Even though it doesn't really happen anything, it feels like it all happens in your imagination.
This one really gave me shivers down my back, because it's so intense and somehow kind of seductive, even though it's quite dark.

Well done,
I love it. <3

irrlichtertanz February 5 2015, 16:55:15 UTC

Warum habe ich das jetzt auf englisch geschrieben? *grübel*

Btw: Warum sind es eigentlich Drabble, wenn sie zB aus 177 Worten bestehen?

killing_kurare February 5 2015, 18:09:43 UTC

Joa, ich hab auch auf englisch geantwortet, von demher xD Just go with the flow :D
Danke fürs Lesen und die vielen Kommentare btw *_*
Und die Community bei femslash100 is da sehr tolerant was die Wortanzahl angeht xD Hauptsache zwischen 100 und 250 Worten. Normalerweise versuch ich schon eine gerade Zahl zu erzielen oder eben ein Schnapsdrabble, aber das war im Zuge des Drabblethon: So viele Prompts umsetzen, wie in drei Tagen möglich ist xD (Hab übrigens mit 32 Drabbles gewonnen :3 yay xD)

Sou, now the answer to the first comment xD
I really had fun writing it with that one to twelve thingy :D I'm so glad I got the angsty athmosphere right, your reaction to it is exactly what I was aiming for xD
Thank you so much for letting me know how you liked it :-*