Porn Star (3/10?)

Jul 12, 2009 22:27

Porn Star (3/10?)
boomtrack @ kiiteruno
JaeMin, YunJae, BFF!YooMin; NC-17, AU Porn-Star!verse; ~4,400 words
Warnings: Strong language, sex, the usual for me.
A porn star and his fanboy.

AN: ( In which I ramble a bit. )

genre: drama, genre: smut, fandom: dbsk, rating: nc-17, pairing: yunjae, length: chaptered, pairing: jaemin, genre: au, fic: porn star

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boomtrack July 14 2009, 13:53:20 UTC
Heeeeee. ♥

I'm really glad you liked it! I'm not sure when the next part will be out, as I really prefer to write on my own laptop and not someone else's computer, so I might not start working on this again until I at least know what's wrong with my laptop and how much it'll be to fix it. :/ Hopefully it won't be too long of a wait. :D

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oldwillow_brook July 13 2009, 05:38:13 UTC
Half of me feels like he's playing with him and the half of him makes me believe he's sincere. The only part of me that feels sincere is because Jaejoong said that he was impressed by Changmin's forwardness (i guess you could say) when he saw him walk down the street. Otherwise I think he's a cocktease. XDD

Hey kid. ♥ 7 is too early, I have a late shoot today. Anything around 9?

He sounds like a model not porn star. WHATEVA STILL HOT.

here in the darkness of the back row of the theater, are severely hampered when Jaejoong falls asleep within the first 15 minutes of the movie.

OMG JAEJOONG OMGOMG. WHY SOCUTE!?

Somehow he thought there'd be fireworks when they first kissed properly, or maybe a Hallelujah chorus in the background (shit, maybe even bells ringing in his mind). There's none of that. Instead he feels a slow, simmering heat low in his belly and a slight twitch of his cock as Jaejoong sucks softly at his lower lip.I liked this paragraph the most because I like how you brought in reality. Kissing Jaejoong wasn't church ( ... )

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boomtrack July 14 2009, 13:56:22 UTC
You think he's playing him, huh? XDDD Interesting.

LOL Not a model, but like "shoot" means a porn shoot XD They're filming a scene or whatnot. XD

I'm trying to make this as realistic as possible with as little angst as possible. I like angst as much as the next person but I intensely dislike writing it, and a whole story about someone having tons of issues isn't really fun to read... I wanted something realistic that was fun to read. XD That's my goal, anyway.

I'm still afraid it's cheesy, but it'll stop being as cheesy as it is now, as their relationship heats up. ;D

I'm really glad you're enjoying it! ♥♥♥

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_happy_as_rain_ July 13 2009, 06:58:47 UTC
Oh oh oh! This chapter is love!! Um um where to start? Questions? How old is Jaejoong? How about Changmin? And what was Jaejoong doing that Saturday night he couldn't meet up with Changmin? JJ sounded a bit nervous there for a sec... :D ( ... )

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boomtrack July 14 2009, 14:02:04 UTC
Hmmm, their ages. Well. During their first date, Changmin mentions being in his third year of college. That would make him around 20 (in Western age, not Korean age). Jaejoong is two years older than Changmin, so he'd be around 22.

Hmm, what was Jaejoong doing that Saturday night that he couldn't meet Changmin? XD Something to keep in mind...

I'm really glad you're enjoying it. :D

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_happy_as_rain_ July 18 2009, 04:49:58 UTC
By the way Jaejoong's been speaking it sounded like he was at least five years older than Changmin haha. I had been imagining Jaejoong in like his mid- to late twenties haha. Which makes me wonder how long he's been in the industry.... must've entered at a really young age lol ( ... )

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boomtrack July 14 2009, 14:03:27 UTC
XD You're not the first person to wonder if Jaejoong's just playing Min. The question is not without merit, but I won't say anything else... ;DD

I'm glad you're enjoying it! ♥

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boomtrack July 14 2009, 14:04:29 UTC
I'll say the same thing to you as I said to the person above you XD You're not the first person to wonder if Jaejoong's just playing Min. The question isn't without merit, but I'm not saying any more than that. XD

Thank you for the hearts bb. ♥♥

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