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Porn Star (3/10?)

Jul 12, 2009 22:27

Porn Star (3/10?)
boomtrack @ kiiteruno
JaeMin, YunJae, BFF!YooMin; NC-17, AU Porn-Star!verse; ~4,400 words
Warnings: Strong language, sex, the usual for me.
A porn star and his fanboy.

AN: ( In which I ramble a bit. )

genre: drama, genre: smut, fandom: dbsk, rating: nc-17, pairing: yunjae, length: chaptered, pairing: jaemin, genre: au, fic: porn star

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oldwillow_brook July 13 2009, 05:38:13 UTC

Half of me feels like he's playing with him and the half of him makes me believe he's sincere. The only part of me that feels sincere is because Jaejoong said that he was impressed by Changmin's forwardness (i guess you could say) when he saw him walk down the street. Otherwise I think he's a cocktease. XDD

Hey kid. ♥ 7 is too early, I have a late shoot today. Anything around 9?

He sounds like a model not porn star. WHATEVA STILL HOT.

here in the darkness of the back row of the theater, are severely hampered when Jaejoong falls asleep within the first 15 minutes of the movie.

OMG JAEJOONG OMGOMG. WHY SOCUTE!?

Somehow he thought there'd be fireworks when they first kissed properly, or maybe a Hallelujah chorus in the background (shit, maybe even bells ringing in his mind). There's none of that. Instead he feels a slow, simmering heat low in his belly and a slight twitch of his cock as Jaejoong sucks softly at his lower lip.

I liked this paragraph the most because I like how you brought in reality. Kissing Jaejoong wasn't church bells or chorus singing it was freaking HOT and it made him horny. Its how kissing actually is. You always get kissing scenes where they feel the world in the other person's lips but thats not how it is at all! Its nice to have reality shoved in there. XDD

I remember you talked about how you were afraid it was too cheesy. It is but it isn't. You have the snarky parts and the reality parts within it that make it much much funnier and much less cheesy. Its a good balance. I really like it. :DD

♥

boomtrack July 14 2009, 13:56:22 UTC

You think he's playing him, huh? XDDD Interesting.

LOL Not a model, but like "shoot" means a porn shoot XD They're filming a scene or whatnot. XD

I'm trying to make this as realistic as possible with as little angst as possible. I like angst as much as the next person but I intensely dislike writing it, and a whole story about someone having tons of issues isn't really fun to read... I wanted something realistic that was fun to read. XD That's my goal, anyway.

I'm still afraid it's cheesy, but it'll stop being as cheesy as it is now, as their relationship heats up. ;D

I'm really glad you're enjoying it! ♥♥♥

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