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Fic: Escaped Vocabulary (NCIS)

Jan 22, 2008 17:25

Title: Escaped Vocabulary
Author: kaylashay81
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Challenge: ncisdrabble100; Challenge #70 - Escape
Spoiler: 05x07 Requiem
Word Count: 300

Crossposted: ncisdrabble100; ncis_haven; ncisfanfic

Summary: Ducky asks Gibbs about his lapse in vocabulary. Episode tag to Requiem.
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fandom: ncis, .genre: gen, character: leroy jethro gibbs (ncis), character: anthony dinozzo (ncis), character: ducky mallard (ncis), challenge: ncisdrabbles100, .fanfic, .noncrossover

Comments 15

donutsweeper January 22 2008, 23:44:13 UTC

*grumble* I want this scene to have aired on the show!!!! *grumble*

kaylashay January 22 2008, 23:51:07 UTC

me too, me too... there was a perfect set up for some Gibbs/Tony scene(s) from that episode.

I've got some rough ideas in my head to do a larger fic from this episode that is kind of in line with my "How do you solve a problem..." fic. Just gotta figure out if I want to go slash or keep it gen, that's the hard choice.

donutsweeper January 22 2008, 23:52:49 UTC

you do both slash and gen so well, it's a hard call.

But, seriously, has any episode needed an episode tag more than "Requiem"? There was just SO much that needed to be addressed and explained and mentioned and... auuuggghhh... *deep breath* You tag was excellent.

kaylashay January 23 2008, 00:04:53 UTC

Yeah, there was so much to be addressed in that episode it isn't even funny. My idea, if I keep it as following the "how do you..." fic, is to have Tony show up at Gibbs' place while he's outside with the lunchbox. This will the first time that Tony shows up to help Gibbs instead of the other way around. Either that or Gibbs goes to Tony's in a reverse of normal for them... hmm... I'm indecisive on that just like I'm indecisive on the slash part.

Thanks for the vote of confidence on my slash vs. gen skills. I never thought I would write slash and usually only read it by select authors and then I found NCIS... and somehow the slash is seeping out everywhere... Don't know what it is about that show, but... ;-)

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courtberger January 23 2008, 00:54:02 UTC

I so want to see you write something more to Requiem and have it be slash!

Donutsweeper is right, that should have been in the show, and they should have included something about Tony and his lungs. *grumbles* I hate when they do that, when they just kind of gloss over things like that.

Court

kaylashay January 23 2008, 02:29:11 UTC

I'm thinking on it... and it most likely will form. :-)

If only every episode could be a full length movie... *sigh*

citymusings January 23 2008, 03:33:29 UTC

Very nice.

kaylashay January 29 2008, 02:07:29 UTC

Ooopsie... I'm behind on commenting on some of these...

Belated thanks! (which considering the story line is appropriate)

citymusings January 29 2008, 02:15:46 UTC

Very appropriate. :)

writinginct January 23 2008, 03:34:08 UTC

^_^

You know how much I love Tibbs right? and this was an nice preTibbs moment :D

I am disappointed that the "Don't make me kiss you, Boss" hasn't been brought up on the show- you *know* Gibbs heard him.

kaylashay January 29 2008, 02:08:43 UTC

All my gen Tony/Gibbs fics seem like pre-Tibbs fics... Just can't help it.

:-)

I need to do something with that line... *think think think*

Belated thanks! (which considering the story line is appropriate)

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kaylashay January 29 2008, 02:11:58 UTC

I'm having fun doing these short scenes. It's a challenge to keep them at 300 words like I've been doing with all of the ones I'm writing. I general have to go back and delete 20-30 words at the end to make it work.

Belated thanks! (which considering the story line is appropriate)