Collide: Chapter Three, part one

[kyasuriin]

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry Potter fandom
Rating: NC-17 overall, this part is closer to R.
Summary (for all parts): AU (Remus never went to Hogwarts). Everytime Remus gets close to someone, they start to uncover the truth about his strange disappearances and injuries. He can't stand the look on their face when he tells them the truth

Comments

[secretsolitaire]

Meep! Cliffhanger!

Another great chapter. :-)

[kyasuriin]

thanks hun :) I shall try to get the next part done asap!

[lilmookat]

ack it stoped, good chapter, I look forward to the next. Remus should just stick it to the man XD

[kyasuriin]

I know, it was a really short chapter or at least it seemed that way to me too. Heh, and Remus definitely should stick it to the man in his mild-manner way :D

[kellygreen]

Bah! Cliffie! It's fantastic so far, hon, and you're almost at 20%!! w00t!

[kyasuriin]

thanks babe :) I'm so far behind, ack! But I'm trying not to worry too much about it. *mwah*

[aquila_star]

Argh, too short, too short. You've got me hanging on by a thread here.

[kyasuriin]

I know, this one seemed short to me too even though it's over 1000 words. Strange. The next part should be longer, I hope :)

[anonymous]

Dude, you have got to update now!!! This chapter was way too short!!! I love how the simplest of words and shortest of sentences can convey so much in your writing. Keep up the good work!