Collide: Chapter Three, part one

[kyasuriin]

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry Potter fandom
Rating: NC-17 overall, this part is closer to R.
Summary (for all parts): AU (Remus never went to Hogwarts). Everytime Remus gets close to someone, they start to uncover the truth about his strange disappearances and injuries. He can't stand the look on their face when he tells them the truth

Comments

[paraserpiente]

*grins* I am really, really enjoying this.

[kyasuriin]

*grins back* I'm glad *warm squishies*

[xrated13]

Awesome details regarding the Department of Magical Creatures. LOVE the appearance of Tonks, gosh, she's so cute! :) And Sirius looking sharp. Sigh, :) so lovely.

[kyasuriin]

thanks! It's funny because it wasn't even meant to be Tonks and then she pulled my hair and said 'let me be in it!' and so I had to let her, heh. Stubborn one, she is. Thanks so much for commenting :)

[ishonn]

Do you even realise what an insufferable tease you are? Tut, tut!

Now, another great chapter. What I love about your story is its unpredictability. I surely believe it will lead to Sirius and Remus being together, but I can't predict your next steps, or Remus and Sirius's steps, for that matter. Which isn't obvious even for an AU.

I'm enjoying it immensely. Great job!

[kyasuriin]

*teases away insufferably* wha? me? never...

Thanks so much for your comment. I do love AUs because you have a bit more freedom in terms of plot. Not that I'm planning on killing anyone off or anything like that, but you know what I mean. Hopefully I can get the next part done soon so you'll be able to guess where it's going, at least for now, heh.

[shaggydogstail]

Sirius is a vampire, yes?

*insert double-endentres about biting here*

Gloria Wood reminds me of my old PE teacher. Heh. All good stuff, and looking forward to the next chapter.

[kyasuriin]

damn, I thought it was subtle. You are far too smart for your own good *nods*

lol, was your PE teacher scary? I can so picture her whipping you guys into shape. Literally.

Thanks so much for commenting, hopefully the next chapter will be arriving soon :)

[marilla82]

*pokes head out of own NaNoing*

*innocent voice*
Why no, I am most certainly not reading Kat's fic when I should be writing. *halo*

This is the first fic I've read in months (other than what I've beta'd) and I LOVE IT!!! I'm looking forward to reading the rest, soon!

[kyasuriin]

I've been awful with reading fanfic lately, meaning that I've been reading a lot of it when I should be writing.

I'm so glad you like my nano :) It's really hard to judge sometimes how AU's are going to go over but so far I'm pleased with this one. Have you been posting your Nano at all? I don't remember seeing it but I could very possibly be blind..

[marilla82]

I like how it's going, too!

No posting of my own NaNo. This story is just for me. Perhaps one day I'll be able to post it. For now, it's a little too raw.