She's So Heavy (I Want You)

[katany]

.:DW:.

2. Just Waiting to Hear from You

.:DW:.

The Doctor pressed his hand tightly to his forehead to stave off his headache. The gesture did little to relieve the throbbing behind his eyes and through his forehead. He deserved far worse than a migraine. That punishment was reserved for his hearts.

He liked humans and humans, even

Comments

[daystarsearcher]

Okay, a bit confused now. On the second read-through I think I understand what's going on, but just to check: what happened in the previous chapter only happened in the Doctor's mind as he followed one potential timeline, and what's happening now is what's actually happening?

Confusion aside, this was an engaging and fun chapter. Sarah's mix of pragmatism and worry/grief was spot-on, and Leela's dialogue was in general well-done, although there were one or two spots where I might've chosen slightly different vocab. I was really, really intrigued in a couple different places, like when Sarah is glad that he forgot her--such an original idea, but you justify very well! And the way Xoanan interprets his memories of Sarah--fascinating and perfect, and I'd love to see it mined further.

Looking forward to more!

[katany]

Thanks for reviewing again

[honniballi]

For some reason, I can’t see all of this content, stuff keeps hiding? Are you taking advantage of java?