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kat_elric September 27 2011, 20:54:34 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I will certainly try. ^_^

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takchik September 25 2011, 21:58:03 UTC
-Flail- so glad i decided to check LJ today <3 this i ssooooooo gooood

I can add you on Google+ i just got my account xD

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takchik September 25 2011, 22:11:56 UTC
...helps if i actually put my name i think xD (Kortni Marcum)

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kat_elric September 27 2011, 20:59:27 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I added you to my readers circle. lol. (yay more people! It was getting kinda weird to talk only to myself...)

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tokkei_12 September 25 2011, 23:07:31 UTC
The other, covered in the scent of death and blood, took one look at him and ran in a completely different direction. I seriously had to pause there because I was laughing so hard XD Up until it attacked Jinki, and then it was like "WTF? Nooooo!" D:< What a lovely rescue sequence though. But of course, nothing can compare to wonderfulness that was Hanchul \O/ Kyaaaaaaa~ Hankyung letting Heechul into his mind was one of the most intimate things ever, especially since it was a result of that incredibly hot exchange with the knife and their blood *drools everywhere* And Heechul determinedly saving Hankyung and later going to take care of him... *wibbles* So touching >.< With respect to Yewook, the Brotherly KibumxYesung was rather great :D “I am interested to see what he will become,” the Fae replied simply. Oh ho, sounds like a sequel in the making. Can't wait for the last chapter!

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kat_elric September 27 2011, 21:02:46 UTC
lol It is sort of an amusing thought until, of course, you figure out why he is running.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I originally had planned for Minho's Talent to surface in protection of Heechul, but I like this better.

I'm glad you enjoyed the Hanchul. Yeah... Hankyung wasn't really bothered by it because he was planning to die... clearly that didn't work....

hehe I love the dynamic between the two Brothers here. They have lived together for a very long time which has made them very close.

*head desk* I know.... evil muses and their not letting this universe die.

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seneferia September 25 2011, 23:12:34 UTC
OH My Shisus what did Ryeowook do? Will he tell Hae? Oh my this was epic I want to know more about the Heechul/Hangeng situation!
Woohoo! Minho has a gift!
I added you on google+ I'm Elizabeth

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kat_elric September 27 2011, 21:04:29 UTC
Um... yeah... Ryeowook didn't really think this one through...

You'll find out a bit more in the next chapter about the Hanchul.

Hehe Minho does have a Talent. I was waiting the whole story to bring that out.

Yay! I added you to my circle!

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stripysockz September 25 2011, 23:38:32 UTC
This is just what I needed right now, amazing chapter. Dear goodness, WHAT did Ryeowook just agree to, that I was not expecting o.O This will be a new plot point. Minho is talking! And has a talent! He and Jinki were just adorable (despite the bloodlust Minho had going on at the same time...).

LOL I was waaay off, I thought Taemin was going to save the day! That did not happen. However the exchange between Heechul and Hankyung was amaaazing, I have to admit my favourite part was Hankyung's irritation at not being allowed to die in peace. HE WOULD. Kangin and Heechul's relationship never fails to make me grin, and awww at Heechul acting like a 'normal Master' for once xD

Woo we also saw Henry's Gift! I love the capitalised Brother you use to describe Kibum and Yesung, it just FITS. And Ryeowook sort of accepting it but not liking it, aww ^_^

Short comment is short. Bad day, but thank you for cheering me up =)

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kat_elric September 27 2011, 21:11:05 UTC
I'm glad I could brighten your day like your comments always brighten mine.

um yeah... new plot point for a side story because I am NOT going there in this one. (mostly because the muses threaten to make it as long as this one...)

I was so excited to get Minho to the point where he was normal again finally.

lol I knew you thought that. I was grinning the whole time.

I'm glad you liked the Hanchul. Yeah... Hankyung was certainly planning to die and not pleased that he couldn't, there is more of that in the next chapter. ^_^

It does! In this universe it means something different to be Brothers. They are both Heechul's children and that makes them close but there is also power in that. (and Ryeowook may never like it even when he has lived with it for centuries).

No worries. I'm glad this could cheer you up! Hope things went better.

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stripysockz September 28 2011, 00:10:40 UTC
Lol this gives me more hope that eventually pretty much everyone will get their own story! Have I ever mentioned how much I LOVE this universe?!

Yay I'm looking forward to the Hanchul! Their relationship in this seriously fascinates me, and it just took a change for the epic so it'll be interesting to see where it goes from here ^_^

To be honest things aren't any better, but thank you <333

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