Well it's sort of a golden oldie that I re-pimped when axmxz brought up the whole slave fantasy thing. It was my first ever H/W story. It's pretty angsty, but practically a fluff-fest compared to what I've been producing lately.
That was hot and intriguing. Nice to see House unable to read Wilson completely for a change. There were so many great turns of phrase in this - I really like your writing.
I'm so glad you liked. I feel I've come a long way since then and so have the canon characters, but it's always fun to pull out the kinky boots and play with them. Thanks so much for your kind comments.
Ok, am going to type this review in Notepad as I read it, because have a lot of things to say.
Firstly, I like the rough stuff, both to read and to do. Intrigued by your warnings.
Love the banter between House and post-coital Wilson. The subtle dangerous conversations are always held when one person is less than fully functional, often sated.
Slow description of Greg in Dominant!seducer mode was mouth wateringly gorgeous. As an ex-HP-Fandom refugee, it threw me back to Sirius, and then Hugh Laurie combined in happy thoughts with Gary Oldman, but I'm waffling now. I would pay money for a high res photo of House in said attire.
"but this particular word carried a world of self-loathing. It came out slowly, but matter-of-factly, in the same tone of voice they might use to discuss a particularly hopeless diagnosis."You give such a good dissection of the word "whore" here. It works well in the mind of House as he figures out Wilson like a case to crack. Also, it seems as though you use it properly. It's a word with some weight, which
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First of all, thank you for reading and giving such a detailed comment. I live for this stuff. One thing I'd like to say is that this was my first H/W fic after spending about 3 months reading the house_slash archives. Since then, I've gotten much more sensitive to the use of smut cliches by myself and others and much, much less likely to use "Greg," "James," and especially "Jimmy." I see that you also commented on "Rainy Night In Princeton" and I think you can see a lot of improvement in my writing between the two stories
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*curtsies* Good fics deserve praise, and even though I'm hideously hypocritical and often post replies of incoherency, it's nice to have a review once in a while, rather than responses. I particularly liked the lines I had mentioned
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Thank you sooooo much honey. I've come a long, long way since I wrote this in terms of H/W characterization and trying to avoid some of the cliches that snuck into this one, both in terms of Housefic and smut!cliches in general, but it was my first baby of the H/W variety so I have much affection and House IN Black is still pretty hot.
I think my smut skills have advanced tremendously since writing this one, but I think it holds up on the smut/angst front and of course HOUSE IN BLACK!
Thanks for continuing to read through my black catalogue. I love love love getting your comments. I hope you're checking back to see that I'm responding to each one.
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Firstly, I like the rough stuff, both to read and to do. Intrigued by your warnings.
Love the banter between House and post-coital Wilson. The subtle dangerous conversations are always held when one person is less than fully functional, often sated.
Slow description of Greg in Dominant!seducer mode was mouth wateringly gorgeous. As an ex-HP-Fandom refugee, it threw me back to Sirius, and then Hugh Laurie combined in happy thoughts with Gary Oldman, but I'm waffling now. I would pay money for a high res photo of House in said attire.
"but this particular word carried a world of self-loathing. It came out slowly, but matter-of-factly, in the same tone of voice they might use to discuss a particularly hopeless diagnosis."You give such a good dissection of the word "whore" here. It works well in the mind of House as he figures out Wilson like a case to crack. Also, it seems as though you use it properly. It's a word with some weight, which ( ... )
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I love House on the edge of loosing control (in any kind of context)!!
I loved it ! I read it was your first H/W fic and please let me say it is soooo good...
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Okay. Wow.
*fans self to cool down*
House in black dom gear...
Wow.
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Thanks for continuing to read through my black catalogue. I love love love getting your comments. I hope you're checking back to see that I'm responding to each one.
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