Ok, am going to type this review in Notepad as I read it, because have a lot of things to say.
Firstly, I like the rough stuff, both to read and to do. Intrigued by your warnings.
Love the banter between House and post-coital Wilson. The subtle dangerous conversations are always held when one person is less than fully functional, often sated.
Slow description of Greg in Dominant!seducer mode was mouth wateringly gorgeous. As an ex-HP-Fandom refugee, it threw me back to Sirius, and then Hugh Laurie combined in happy thoughts with Gary Oldman, but I'm waffling now. I would pay money for a high res photo of House in said attire.
"but this particular word carried a world of self-loathing. It came out slowly, but matter-of-factly, in the same tone of voice they might use to discuss a particularly hopeless diagnosis."You give such a good dissection of the word "whore" here. It works well in the mind of House as he figures out Wilson like a case to crack. Also, it seems as though you use it properly. It's a word with some weight, which
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First of all, thank you for reading and giving such a detailed comment. I live for this stuff. One thing I'd like to say is that this was my first H/W fic after spending about 3 months reading the house_slash archives. Since then, I've gotten much more sensitive to the use of smut cliches by myself and others and much, much less likely to use "Greg," "James," and especially "Jimmy." I see that you also commented on "Rainy Night In Princeton" and I think you can see a lot of improvement in my writing between the two stories
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*curtsies* Good fics deserve praise, and even though I'm hideously hypocritical and often post replies of incoherency, it's nice to have a review once in a while, rather than responses. I particularly liked the lines I had mentioned
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Oh thank you very much! I'm just trying to remember, (I've been gorging on House fic recently) that I read a dom!Wilson today. *skips off to find it* Missing Sin, by onewayfreak Which has an interesting step dynamic of power - Chase at the bottom, House at the top. But that's not the one I'm looking for. Hmm. An Honest Mistake - Acidic Flower, also HWC, but this Was the one I was referring to. Wilson is just as demanding. If you don't know it you might like it. I've linked you to the part with the links to the rest of the chapters. There's only four parts.
acidic_flower is a goddess. An Honest Mistake is one of favorite fics EVER. I love sexually aggressive Wilson, although I'm not sure it's exactly the same as dom!Wilson.
You have a point there, a good one. I shall therefore backtrack and say that sexually aggressive Wilson is definitely an emerging kink of mine, and that I shall reserve judgement on Dom!Wilson until I read some :P
Firstly, I like the rough stuff, both to read and to do. Intrigued by your warnings.
Love the banter between House and post-coital Wilson. The subtle dangerous conversations are always held when one person is less than fully functional, often sated.
Slow description of Greg in Dominant!seducer mode was mouth wateringly gorgeous. As an ex-HP-Fandom refugee, it threw me back to Sirius, and then Hugh Laurie combined in happy thoughts with Gary Oldman, but I'm waffling now. I would pay money for a high res photo of House in said attire.
"but this particular word carried a world of self-loathing. It came out slowly, but matter-of-factly, in the same tone of voice they might use to discuss a particularly hopeless diagnosis."You give such a good dissection of the word "whore" here. It works well in the mind of House as he figures out Wilson like a case to crack. Also, it seems as though you use it properly. It's a word with some weight, which ( ... )
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Missing Sin, by onewayfreak Which has an interesting step dynamic of power - Chase at the bottom, House at the top. But that's not the one I'm looking for. Hmm.
An Honest Mistake - Acidic Flower, also HWC, but this Was the one I was referring to. Wilson is just as demanding. If you don't know it you might like it. I've linked you to the part with the links to the rest of the chapters. There's only four parts.
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