(for jonginsomniac) Concentric Circles

[dontlookforme]

For: jonginsomniac
Title: Concentric Circles
Pairings: Kai/D.O.
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5,920
Summary: Jongin and Kyungsoo parted ways months ago; but the ties that bind them run so deep and so strong that it’s hard to let go.
Author’s Note: To my recipient, I hope this isn't too far from what you wanted. It was a pleasure writing for you and I hope you will

Comments

[sleighlay]

i am very not okay right now how dare you make me feel this way

starting with this: The house phone rings and he ignores it. His hands are slick from the wood polish and his heart is worn paper-thin; there just isn't a single tattered shred of energy left in him to deal with whoever might be calling so he lets it ring unanswered.

you can just tell that he is not okay. not at all. he's worn down mentally and physically

i hope it's okay if i skip commenting on sad jongin and the angsty parts because sad jongin makes me sad OTL

"You are the cheesiest fuck, Jongin," and Jongin had replied, "Shh, let me be your coffee cup, Do Kyungsoo." COFFEE CUP COFFEE CUPPP I LOVE THIS LINE SO MUCH ITS SO CUTE UNGH I CANT EXPLAIN THE FEELS I GET BUT THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE LINES OKAY

also holy macaroni your descriptions are so on point and perfect. always.

they'd tattooed their love onto each other's bodies this this this

[lotusk]

/ROLLS OVER YOU WITH LOVE

[keylaness]

The early part of this fic is making me anxious, jittery feelings
but thank god it ends on a good note :))))))
sighhhhhhh how on earth you get the idea of the coffee cup.....?!!!
it's so so so so sweet!!!!!
but lol i was rereading twice at the part where jongin become a bit obsessed in cleaning because well people rarely potrayed him like that! hahaha
And yes to the part "I've missed this ass."
I mean who can resist jongin's ass anyway!
All in all, good job for this fic!!!!!!!
Somehow I can imagine myself rereading this again in few months when I am in need of slight angst but ends with happy ending fic!!!
Thank you for a great fic again :))))

[lotusk]

Thanks so much Keyla! As for the coffee cup, I had to use something circular and then I researched the internet for the perfect cup \o/ I'm so glad you liked it!

[lotusk]

Oh I couldn't have survived Jongin's sadness from day 1. My heart would not have made it bc I'm not one for writing or reading sad things so this was tough for me. I'm so glad you connected with it!

[bluedreaming]

This was beautiful (ㅠ_ㅠ) I'm not ashamed to admit that I teared up at the tiny moments that together painted so much heartbreak and yet ended up in a poignant reunion. I still feel like they cheated fate? Like their happiness is too good to be true? I have to go back to reread that they did meet in the music store, they did go home together, they did take solace in remapping the newly foreign territory of each other's skin. Your story was gorgeous ☆彡 thank you for writing it.

[lotusk]

THIS POETIC COMMENT ;;;;;;

[bluedreaming]

Because it was a poetic story!!!!

[charliebnim]

this was so so pretty !!!! :' oh god.. BUT kyungsoo is fucking right omfg TT_TT <3

[lotusk]

I'm glad you think so, Charlie! It was so tough to write bc you know me and sad stuff aren't good friends lol