Fic: With Hindsight, Remus/James, NC17

[kabeyk]

Continuing my habit of posting fics when I'm pretty sure everyone else is busy reading other things…

Title: With Hindsight
Pairing: Remus/James
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Remus has a bit of an obsession with baths, while James has a bit of an obsession with Remus.
Warnings: Voyeurism. Sort-of. And UST.
Notes: It has been said that

Comments

[fleshdress]

Oh why can't James go in? Do it, James! You know you want to!

Aside from my frustration with the bloody boys, this was lovely. I particularly liked this bit here: possibly filled with gravy or lime jelly, or rum and cola, or the dismembered remains of Severus Snape on ice. Yes. :)

[kabeyk]

Oh he really does want to. I hate it when characters don't do what you want them to.

It had to be lime jelly. Lime jelly! Ahem. Everything's funnier when it's lime-flavoured.

kxx

[pir8fancier]

Dear god, the unresolved sexual tension! Bravo!

[kabeyk]

Oh god, I know. I almost never do UST - I can't bear it.

Thank you.x

kxx

[thrupenny]

Argh, brilliant UST. Am I weird for being glad that James didn't? Hmm.

Love preety Remus with his curly hair, ahh.

I have to say though, I'm right there with Sirius about the evils of baths. I hates them.

why don't I have any Belle and Sebastien?

I dunno. I can sort some out for you though :)

[kabeyk]

Yes. You freak. Even I wanted him to, and I could have forced him. But didn't. You are right, it would have been wrong if he had.

Curly hair is love, but baths are too.

They were playing Belle and Seb in the pub I was in on Sunday, and now I'm a-pining. And I know the reason I haven't any on my computer is because sis has stolen my those CDs from me. I keel her.

I don't know how the sorting out would work - I don't know how to use any of those music-sharing thingys. Love.

kxx

[thrupenny]

Very wrong. Lily/James OTP! Heh. Besides, it's rare to find that kind of tension left at exactly the right point and you've completely nailed it.

I also love that even though he isn't physically in the fic at all, Sirius is such a character. You're really good at capturing whole swathes of things in very few words. x

CD stealing is so mean.

Sorry, didn't mean to sound like a dodgy school-gate music pusher ("Here kids, try some Pulp!"). I meant that I could upload some things for you to download (I am right in thinking that you've got broadband now?. No bother at all :)

[kabeyk]

Unfotunately, it wasn't so much leaving the tension at exactly the right point as it was just that the fic wouldn't let me have them go any further, sigh.

dodgy school-gate music pusher

Heh, class. Yeah, broadband, though I still wouldn't know what I was doing. Oh, I love you. Now I'm thinking about which Belle and Seb songs I want most...

kxx

[absinthe_lust]

Mmmmmfff. God, for the love of....I don't know, someone. This is fucking delicious. And LOVE for your Remus. Love all over the place.

[kabeyk]

Aw, Remus is kinda smug and slutty in this, ain't he? Mmm.

Thank you. 'Delicious' is such a glorious compliment.x

kxx

[beckaandzac]

Perfect, perfect, perfect, and oh-so-fucking-hot, and I don't even like Remus/James, except that when you do it it makes so much sense.

Also, I was pleasantly appalled by the descriptions of the squalor of Remus' and Sirius' flat, and the contrast of that to bathing.

Please tell me that someday soon James throws off the last trappings of conscience and gets in the bath with Remus.

[kabeyk]

Of course it makes sense. James is massively gay and they are made for each other. Sort of.

See, that's just what I'm like; so long as my body is clean I don't care about the mess around me. 'Pleasantly appalled', I like it.

Maybe. :P Love.x

kxx