Fic: With Hindsight, Remus/James, NC17

[kabeyk]

Continuing my habit of posting fics when I'm pretty sure everyone else is busy reading other things…

Title: With Hindsight
Pairing: Remus/James
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Remus has a bit of an obsession with baths, while James has a bit of an obsession with Remus.
Warnings: Voyeurism. Sort-of. And UST.
Notes: It has been said that

Comments

[kabeyk]

Heh, I do it on purpose, when I'm not sure about a fic. This one has been lurking on my hard-drive for so long.

Oh, there's something so delightfully filthy about Remus having a wank in James' bathroom while James is listening outside.

Love.x I have no idea what :3 means, but it makes me think of Dr Zoidburg.

kxx

[kabeyk]

He's going to get a smacked botty!

I can't write hampster without putting a P in it. There I go again...

[rinsbane]

Perfect, just wonderful the way you left it hanging, the way we wait with James outside that door. Love the tension there, the utter familiarity and strangeness of it all that we get to see in James.

[kabeyk]

Aw, thank you very much.x

kxx

[menina_raposa]

A new fic from you makes my day!

[kabeyk]

Aw, cheers.x

Your icon is looking at me funny...

kxx

[misconstrue]

oh my gosh, that ending tears my heart, but you've left enough play for me to imagine the sex to be out-of-tub. please

I adore how you've crafted it, with all the details of the Black-Lupin flat and how the boys have grown older, and their casual familiarity. It's so briliant.

[kabeyk]

On the wet bathroom floor, I think. Oh yes.

Heh, even when I'm writing Remus/James I have to have Remus and Sirius sharing a flat.

Thank you.x

kxx

[aquila_star]

Wow. This is brilliant.

James and Remus is not really something I go for, but you made them so....just perfect. So real. And the UST?? Slay me.

The ending, so bittersweet, I actually ache.

[kabeyk]

Heh. I never never write UST, and this one only ended up that way because it just had to. Ugh, I hate when that happens.

Thank you very much.x

kxx