Fic: Coming Clean, Remus/Sirius, R/NC17

[kabeyk]

Title: Coming Clean
Author: kabeyk
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: hard R to NC17
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Squeaky, awkward, first-time bath-sex.
Author notes: Many thanks to _emeraldgreen, minnow_53 wildestranger and liadlaith for the read-through. Title suggested by minnow_53, woo! Written for the birthday of bonoffee, which was, like, yonks ago. Sorry.

Comments

[dramaphile]

I love how awkward and imperfect this is, all full of fumbly wet boylovin. yum.

Sirius didn't know whether to laugh or, well, stare. 'Look, if you wanna have a wank just go for it; I've seen James do it loads.'

Remus made a funny choky noise. 'You've seen him-'

*giggle* nunnghhh Sirius watching James wank= karyn's melted brains.

[kabeyk]

Hee, thank you! I just wanted to write something really messy and awkward, so thank you.x

Heh, oh yeah, and I'm writing some Sirius/James at the moment.

kxx

[dramaphile]

Heh, oh yeah, and I'm writing some Sirius/James at the moment.

*gropes you for encouragement*

[kabeyk]

Ooh, that groping is really helping, oh yeah... Just a bit lower...

[_emeraldgreen]

Yay! I'm allowed to squeal now and not be serious! (not that I was anyway)

Remus' worried eyes were far too bright now and his toes were wiggling unhappily beneath Sirius' knees

WRIGGLING TOES! EEE! I have such a foot kink, and yet they totally squick me at the same time. But I LIKE it when they squick me. *is weird*

I LOVED the awkwardness of it, oh yes, and most of all, THE SQUEAKY NOISES!

Oh gosh, and Remus kissing badly *has a kink for bad kissing in fic* and Sirius' pant-stealing and Remus' fingers and lovely long, gangly legs, all folded up in the bath like a spider, but much, much prettier and not disgusting and I'm going to stop talking about spiders before I make myself feel sick. Anyway! LOVE IT! [/squealing]

[kabeyk]

Wow, liking being squicked, that's a proper kink, that is.

I knew it! I knew it was the squeaky noises! Ha!

Sicko.

Thank you so much.x

kxx

[_emeraldgreen]

Hee, it's only with funny squicks like feet. I don't like getting seriously squicked by nasty stuff! So, only half a pervert really.

I told you I was predictable! The squeaky noises win.

[kabeyk]

Half a pervert, heh.x

[glass_houses]

Fabulous! I loved when Sirius first got into the tub.. oh, the awkwardness was portrayed deliciously.

[kabeyk]

Heh. Oh, thank you.

kxx

[foulbeggar]

Oh, the porn! It scars my innocent little mind while also being wonderful to read because it's so well done.
The tension and the awkwardness and the tight pants! Splendid.
I loved how unsure they both were and how wholly unromantic it seemed. They are, after all, teenage boys with raging hormones.

But: 'and no girl could ever look so fucking beautiful' ... awwwwww. Fuzzlewuzzle. Lovely line.

[kabeyk]

Yes, unromance, I love it! Thank you.x

Hee, fancy you noticing the tight pants when _emeraldgreen didn't!

Thank you.x

kxx

[absinthe_lust]

Oohhh, YAY BATHTUB PORN. Excellent. Yay for indignant!spontaneous!Sirius and reading-in-the-bathtub!Remus. Much love for this.

[kabeyk]

Heh, thank you. I love reading in the bath, so I just couldn't help adding that in. Heh.

kxx