Title: Coming Clean
Author:
kabeykPairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: hard R to NC17
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Squeaky, awkward, first-time bath-sex.
Author notes: Many thanks to
_emeraldgreen,
minnow_53 wildestranger and
liadlaith for the read-through. Title suggested by
minnow_53, woo! Written for the birthday of
bonoffee, which was, like, yonks ago. Sorry.
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and Remus kissed him then; badly and full of teeth and bathwater and too much saliva )
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Sirius didn't know whether to laugh or, well, stare. 'Look, if you wanna have a wank just go for it; I've seen James do it loads.'
Remus made a funny choky noise. 'You've seen him-'
*giggle* nunnghhh Sirius watching James wank= karyn's melted brains.
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Heh, oh yeah, and I'm writing some Sirius/James at the moment.
kxx
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*gropes you for encouragement*
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Remus' worried eyes were far too bright now and his toes were wiggling unhappily beneath Sirius' knees
WRIGGLING TOES! EEE! I have such a foot kink, and yet they totally squick me at the same time. But I LIKE it when they squick me. *is weird*
I LOVED the awkwardness of it, oh yes, and most of all, THE SQUEAKY NOISES!
Oh gosh, and Remus kissing badly *has a kink for bad kissing in fic* and Sirius' pant-stealing and Remus' fingers and lovely long, gangly legs, all folded up in the bath like a spider, but much, much prettier and not disgusting and I'm going to stop talking about spiders before I make myself feel sick. Anyway! LOVE IT! [/squealing]
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I knew it! I knew it was the squeaky noises! Ha!
Sicko.
Thank you so much.x
kxx
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I told you I was predictable! The squeaky noises win.
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kxx
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The tension and the awkwardness and the tight pants! Splendid.
I loved how unsure they both were and how wholly unromantic it seemed. They are, after all, teenage boys with raging hormones.
But: 'and no girl could ever look so fucking beautiful' ... awwwwww. Fuzzlewuzzle. Lovely line.
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Hee, fancy you noticing the tight pants when _emeraldgreen didn't!
Thank you.x
kxx
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kxx
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