Fic: Coming Clean, Remus/Sirius, R/NC17

[kabeyk]

Title: Coming Clean
Author: kabeyk
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: hard R to NC17
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Squeaky, awkward, first-time bath-sex.
Author notes: Many thanks to _emeraldgreen, minnow_53 wildestranger and liadlaith for the read-through. Title suggested by minnow_53, woo! Written for the birthday of bonoffee, which was, like, yonks ago. Sorry.

Comments

[liadlaith]

*snort* I love the title! Oh, my little tartlet, you do write the most . . . envigorating porn. Loves it! I don't know what you changed, but I did buy Sirius' sudden Moony-conversion this time.

[kabeyk]

The title was minnow's idea, I love it!

Just added a couple of stronger hints in, really, not too much. I think the hints I had in before were too vague.

Heh, I love you.x Thanks.

kxx

[dsbs]

Hee, excellent ending. And thank goodness for the warning (though it was a WHILE ago :P ) Also - what a title.

[kabeyk]

Heh, thank you.x

kxx

[wildestranger]

PORN! And it is the most porniest porn that ever there was!

Oh how I love your nasty but ogling Remus, and your Sirius who isn't quite aware of his own intentions. Bless them sweet boys.

[kabeyk]

Aw, Remus is all bitter and jealous. And pervy, heh.

Thank you!

kxx

[minnow_53]

You really did use the title! And it does suit it, yes. :D Good to see this posted! It is the porniest of the porny, and I'm sure bonoffee" will love it.

^_^xx

[kabeyk]

The title really does suit it, and everyone's loving it more than the fic. Thanks.x

kxx

[minnow_53]

No, they're not!

Btw, the bad tag was the birthday girl: I have a problem, because her name makes me think of banoffee pie, and I get confused...

^_^xx

[kabeyk]

Heh, I assumed that. Oh don't, I love banoffee pie.

kxx

[shaggydogstail]

Ah, lovely. Smut in the bath is my idea of good, clean fun.

I really enjoyed the initial hostility, which positively shook with sexual tension, and the stupid awkwardness of trying to do it in the bath, because that's never as easy as it sounds. And the ending was just that little bit sweet, but not too much and still hot.

Poor Harriet is going to be really pissed that Remus doesn't use bubble bath though.

[kabeyk]

Was there really proper sexual tension? Thank you.x

Hell, I have problems just reading in the bath by myself.

Hah, yes, if only he did then she'd get Sirius.

kxx

[merenwen_81]

It's quite clear Sirius wants Remus and mentions the girl's breasts to make Remus jealous and Remus is appropriately jealous and stares too long. So there's lots of tension.

I don't have a bathtub and if I did, I would never read it it, because I would get the pages wet anyway.

[kabeyk]

Aw, thank you.x

I was going to ask how you can live without a bathtub, but soon I won't have one, wah.

kxx