Title: Coming Clean
Author:
kabeykPairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: hard R to NC17
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Squeaky, awkward, first-time bath-sex.
Author notes: Many thanks to
_emeraldgreen,
minnow_53 wildestranger and
liadlaith for the read-through. Title suggested by
minnow_53, woo! Written for the birthday of
bonoffee, which was, like, yonks ago. Sorry.
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and Remus kissed him then; badly and full of teeth and bathwater and too much saliva )
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Just added a couple of stronger hints in, really, not too much. I think the hints I had in before were too vague.
Heh, I love you.x Thanks.
kxx
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Oh how I love your nasty but ogling Remus, and your Sirius who isn't quite aware of his own intentions. Bless them sweet boys.
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Thank you!
kxx
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^_^xx
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Btw, the bad tag was the birthday girl: I have a problem, because her name makes me think of banoffee pie, and I get confused...
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I really enjoyed the initial hostility, which positively shook with sexual tension, and the stupid awkwardness of trying to do it in the bath, because that's never as easy as it sounds. And the ending was just that little bit sweet, but not too much and still hot.
Poor Harriet is going to be really pissed that Remus doesn't use bubble bath though.
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Hell, I have problems just reading in the bath by myself.
Hah, yes, if only he did then she'd get Sirius.
kxx
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I don't have a bathtub and if I did, I would never read it it, because I would get the pages wet anyway.
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I was going to ask how you can live without a bathtub, but soon I won't have one, wah.
kxx
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