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[k_pop4life]

Title: The Sound of a Heartbeat

Pairing: Jongkey. Vampire!AU

Rating: R

Words: 1,300+

Summary: The night brings with her mysterious creatures that lurk in the dark.

Comments

[just2wings]

I like that you stuck to the more conventional vampire lore, when they charm and seduce their prey, and that you made Jonghyun a bit creepy that way. I felt so sorry for Key at the beginning, and then the eeriness settled in and idk it really felt like a vampire fic ^^ (I wouldn't be opposed to more /ahem) And blond vamp!Jonghyun? Yes please! ^^

[k_pop4life]

I am glad that you liked it honey! I don't even know where it came from. before I started writing it I sort of wanted to make Jonghyun a serial killer because I told you I was watching those documentaries but I guess that'll be a plot for another time. As soon as I started writing this I couldn't shake the idea of vampire!jonghyun out of my head.

More? I don't know. I am going to think about it but I can't really promise anything. You know me! Thank you for commenting babe!

[life_not_knife]

This left me craving for more, but if you like it as a standalone then that is cool too. Honestly, this was perfect... so creepy and seductive and a little bit angsty in places. I like how Jonghyun actually stalked him like prey and didn't even mess around. I love how Key got that 'feeling' [the one we all hate] and decided to just run and not look back. That made it really realistic for me, to say it was a vampire fic haha.

Anyways, I loved this, thanks so much for writing and sharing.

Xx L xX

[k_pop4life]

I wanted to make it less sexual and more creepy that way. I wanted Key to be completely captivated by Jonghyun's presence so I am glad that my intentions came across through the fic.

Like I mentioned in the other comment I'll think about adding more to the story but I can't promise anything. I tend to forget about things or lose interest in certain things quickly and since I just had this moment in my mind I don't really know where it would go after this.

Thank you for commenting ♥

[nadianadeen]

I always thought it's impossible for me to love the whole vampire can seduce their prey thingy, but wow I can say yours are quite endearing.. I mean jonghyun was creepy as hell but somehow I still think he's charming? I hope my comment not creeping you out lol

[k_pop4life]

Of course not. Your comment doesn't creep me out. I appreciate it a lot honey.

I'm happy you found this enjoyable ♡ thanks for commenting.

[shineeshipper08]

Wheeew I really liked the atmosphere in this fic. And how Jjong turned slightly sweet at the end XP. I kinda want a sequel although I would have no idea why it would be about or if it's even possible ._.
Never the less I really like this fic and I really like the idea behind the ending :D

[k_pop4life]

I'll definitely think about adding to this but like i mentioned before i really can't promise anything as of now because I don't have a concrete idea in my head of what i would write.

I'm really happy you liked the fic. Thank you for commenting have a great day ♥

[shineeshipper08]

Yeah no pressure in adding to it, thanks a lot for considering it though c:. It's just really really good and I'm just really really greedy XD.
and thank you! hehe I hope your day is amazing too :)

[darkanoir]

Hi

[k_pop4life]

wow! i seriously sat in front of my computer for a while not knowing how to reply to this. Your comment is not pointless or lame at all. In fact, i really appreciate it. Thank you for the honesty, i know this is not even close to being a good story because I am only starting to get into writing as a hobby and I don't do it often enough to develop more skills. I also need to write what it's on my mind at the same sitting otherwise i'll lose motivation to finish it which might explain why a lot of what i write is short.

Anyhow, I am really glad you enjoyed it and that it gave you that impression because I wanted it to feel creepy and I wanted jonghyun to take advantage of Key's emotional vulnerability. I am actually really happy to hear that I did a good job at developing jonghyun's image because i feel like one of the things that i lack when i write are descriptions and details.

I will seriously think about adding more to the story but like i keep mentioning to other people, i can't promise anything as of now. my classes keep

[darkanoir]

I'm glad you appreciated the comment and don't worry, it was a pleasure to leave you one :)
Btw, you misunderstood me! I said this isn't the best vampire story out there, but this doesn't mean "it isn't anywhere near good". Don't think so low of this shot of yours, as I've said, it was really nice and it was also full of potential if developed just a tad more^^

Btw, I can fully understand that writing a sequel isn't simple, 'cause finding time isn't always that easy and also because inspiration can be an even bigger enemy. So, don't worry if you won't be able to!^^

Well...have a good day!^^ (or evening...? Idk lol)

[k_pop4life]

Oh no I understand but I'm always harsher on myself and whatnot. aren't we all? I think i need to work on developing my ideas with more detail.

Evening! which reminds me i REALLY have to get started on studying for my tests next week!